im the future
 

Cant think in this moment im trapped with a gasp deciphering this omen
Tragedies will make you live unhappily wen you lose money you will owe men
Taking the wrong paths with a tilted hat liven on the streets gunnin down catz
Im a prodigy god will take me last but what does that matter cuz live flys by fast
Disrespectin is my weapon only hadda flash my nine tought you a quick lesson
Switch up the nine pull out my wesson trade for an ak gutta keep you guessin
Its you im testin Beantown im reppin dont worry baby aint no need for stressin
Neva say neva anything can be done Flash out ya nine all that beef turns to none
Smack up that bitch rock out to sum 41 im out this bitch peace man 1 :hump:

First open mic feedback please

uppin for feed people ^^^^

Had an ight rhyme shceme....but seriously man....ya had boring content.

Poor structure too.Wording was terrible as well.You were all over the place.

No hate...just my opinion..

coo coo i respect the opinion^^ more feedback plz people....

ya lines is too strectched out.. split em up a little.. other that its a good piece

still lookin for more feeddback paleeez

werd fix up the scuture other than that it was ok

thanks peeps......still lookin for feedback......

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upping please lets go guys

i wasn't really feelin this one...it was ight...im not sayin it was bad...structure was kinda jacked up...fix that...and it woulda been alot betta...

Thats bullshit feed man dont come in here just tryna get ur posts up.....if u gunna post feed make it real...not stupid ass shit like that.