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Boiling Point!!
Theres a Certain Line of Significance that u Dont Cross That Specific Limit thats Pushed till All Respects Lost Even the Boldest Soilders can Loose they Composure Energy Waisted in Verbal Conflicts Start 2 Cum Closer Vigerus Outrages Build up as i flip thru these Pages Blurry Output Develops Clear until i Recognize Faces That the Average Listner... wouldnt Begin 2 Grasp That the Good Guys Most of the time Finish Last Take the Minimal Advice and finally Open your Eyes To Try to Realize the Allibies of your very own Guys That you Associate and Conduct your Business With Over a Certain Amount of Shit......Even Bests Split Even the Soilder with the Most Composure Breaks The Factor of Whether he's Truely one of the Greats Understand where im Coming from..Let the Love Glisten The 1st Untested i guarantee you will go into Submission He Probly will let his Armor tilt over unto his own Shoulder Once his Pride Deceases into Pieces he becomes Colder and Lets the World Issues get Used into Cubes like Ice Frozen into Cartiac and His Life Flashes before his Eyes Because this is A Different Ball game and a Different Park Bullies and the Bullied can Increase the Peace b4 it Start But they Ignore the Little Signals that the Devil Embezzles Until they Pushed and Tortured and Provoked to that Level Where the Semi Automatiks and Twelve Gagues are Drawn At each Others Forheads over wha Another Said Last Dawn ....Feel it Boiling thru tha Joints....Up Comes the Pressure and Down goes the Joy...Up comes the Man...Down goes the Boy ....Push me...........push me .......2 that Boiling Point...... Once you Prevoke certain Individuals then u not Rhymin Estimate the Moment of Impact..........Go Head Time it Beef and Controversy Develop and Embellish in Seconds When Blood Pressures Boil and Loyalty splits in Sections ........Honestly im Purely Exhausted from these Coffins Sunken from Singapore..Delaware...to Detroit to Bosten Once the Seal is Broken and the Pride is finally Provoken No Cingular Minute Useage cant Deny what was Spoken That Pushs you to React......... in Animalistic Fashions Where Violent Outlashes on Others Mans in Lil Rations Jealously Hunger Tiredness and Pain fillz His Olding Joints Now u realize what its Like 2 be Pushed to That Boiling Point. ...Nuff Said... |
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oooooo shit dat was fire dat was so fuckin dope it was a good point made to dis was so hot sturcture was good made it easy to read yo vocab was awesome yo flow stayed on point it was a good verse i dont usually give 10/10 but here is one rite here
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4 sho...i aint really spend no time on this...but thanks 4 the honest feedback
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2nd 10/10 i've ever given.....lol everything was on point.....perfect structure.....your point got across....flowed very well.....nice vocab....everything was nice...i can relate to that the boiling point.....man i know what that's like...perfect title....keep that fire goin....10/10!
return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171975 keep spittin your fire.... |
4 sho..glad 2 see how ya feel bout this quick type up...the next one i drop im takein my time...and gettin open mic of the month got damnit...
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i liked this a lot...
the flow was on point...really good considering the amount of vocab you put into it and even the structure was on point... i liked the emotion and definately a lot of imagery the vocab showed this through easily... 10/10 imo, good shit keep em comin return the favor on mine if you want... peace |
that was good alright but i have to say sounds a lot like eminems "toy soilders" man
everything highlighted in blue is a line from toy soilders 1:Theres a Certain Line of Significance that u Dont Cross 2: Loose they Composure 3: Energy Waisted =ive spent so muc enegy on it honestly im exuasted... 4: Even the Soilder with the Most Composure Breaks 5: A Different Ball game =you call names and you aint just rappen.. not saying u bitting just saying u definitly got inspiration from that rap thats all nice drop 8/10 |
that was a sick drop fam's it was perfect it flowed well wit good structure an u had sum good vocab.....10/10....Keep it up fam's....1
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Holy 1...thats tha beat i was listnin 2 when i was writein it...good job on knowin ya music
and um im gettin all these damn 10's .....i smell a nomination 4 open mic of Jan |
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i wouldnt expect less from troop. i felt those lines personally. i used to loose battles i knew that i should have won, cause my opponent would sway or leave "return the favor" votes on other battles. but good verse. no flaws. hit me up for a collaberation, names: eph
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4 sho i kno who u are fam.....get at me 4 a topic
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nice nice nice..i dont give number rankings, but if i did, this would be up there. good flow, and some serious emotions involved here.
id like to see more of your drops. peace |
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