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Kordozar vs Skriptz
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12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 01-08-05 at 10:49 PM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. |
Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 10:27 PM.
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Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 10:28 PM.
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[Center]This Fello"Solja"Got Merked By A "Troop",But It Wasnt A Friendly Fire...
Usin A Pottasium And Drop Of Water Kid Still Wouldnt Catch Fire... He Wass Fired 4rm "Subway"So His Chance Of W"rapping"Wass Ruined.. 1 Of A Kind Kid,First Ever Ta Be Concealed 4rm 2 Men... Be4 Legendary Mc's Made Cuts He Left Out Tha Group.. He Wants Ta Be A G So He Bit His Location Off Of Snoop.. Kids Not Made 4rm Rappin Like Poetry "Skriptz".... His Bars Are Streched Than Tha Ladies Gap 4rm Floetry Iss.. Tried Ta Elivate,But Fell Down Like Pepl With Amputated Legs.. .........Why Should Skriptz Verse Even Go In This Battle? Theas A Question You Post In Tha Thread...... Soulja42o? But Kids Softer Than Baked Bread...... ********** Troop Koed Him He 4rm 213 Like Snoop Left Legendary Mc's B4 Cuts And He Posts In Tha Why Thread Alot |
Uppin Skriptz Verse.......................
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No Punches, It’d Be A Miracle, Even If Kordozar’s Hans Were Connected
The Difference Is, I Rise To The Occasion, You Just Stand Corrected The More I Read Your Lines, Seems The More They Got Worse Looks Like You Got A Lot Of Bad Mistakes, Not Including Your Verse Ya Battles Kid Are Wack, Not To Mention Your Flow, Its Terrible This Kid Thinks He's Underground, Cause He's In A Toxic Waste Barrel Said You Stopped Battling, Well You Should've Stayed On The Shelf Those Versus You Made, Were Bad, You've Got Permission To Hate Yourself You Think You Hard Kid? Ya Head Will Explode, You'll Be Retarded In Fact I'm Enlarging The Wack, And Your The Biggesy Opponent To Harbor The Stat Got A Repelant For Herbs, Good Thing This Is Internet, Kord Can't get Near He Thinks His Future Is Bright, Cause He Got His Head In Tha Sphere Dont Get Tha Punches Or Personals? Dont Vote Then Hoes... |
Good Luck Mayn....Just A Friendly Battle Though :)
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Voted For: Skriptz
Kordozar: This Fello"Solja"Got Merked By A "Troop",But It Wasnt A Friendly Fire... Usin A Pottasium And Drop Of Water Kid Still Wouldnt Catch Fire... Eh, decent opener He Wass Fired 4rm "Subway"So His Chance Of W"rapping"Wass Ruined.. 1 Of A Kind Kid,First Ever Ta Be Concealed 4rm 2 Men... Opener was played, punch was weak Be4 Legendary Mc's Made Cuts He Left Out Tha Group.. He Wants Ta Be A G So He Bit His Location Off Of Snoop.. Decent personal in 1st line, 2nd line was weak Kids Not Made 4rm Rappin Like Poetry "Skriptz".... His Bars Are Streched Than Tha Ladies Gap 4rm Floetry Iss.. Wack setup, punch was aight Tried Ta Elivate,But Fell Down Like Pepl With Amputated Legs.. .........Why Should Skriptz Verse Even Go In This Battle? Theas A Question You Post In Tha Thread...... Soulja42o? But Kids Softer Than Baked Bread... Wtf? Is that 3 lines or 4? Skriptz: No Punches, It’d Be A Miracle, Even If Kordozar’s Hans Were Connected The Difference Is, I Rise To The Occasion, You Just Stand Corrected Setup was decent, but punch delivered. Good opener The More I Read Your Lines, Seems The More They Got Worse Looks Like You Got A Lot Of Bad Mistakes, Not Including Your Verse Good punch, link made it harder because it proves he's wack Ya Battles Kid Are Wack, Not To Mention Your Flow, Its Terrible This Kid Thinks He's Underground, Cause He's In A Toxic Waste Barrel Weak Said You Stopped Battling, Well You Should've Stayed On The Shelf Those Versus You Made, Were Bad, You've Got Permission To Hate Yourself Decent You Think You Hard Kid? Ya Head Will Explode, You'll Be Retarded In Fact I'm Enlarging The Wack, And Your The Biggesy Opponent To Harbor The Stat Decent bar overall, punch didn't hit that hard though Got A Repelant For Herbs, Good Thing This Is Internet, Kord Can't get Near He Thinks His Future Is Bright, Cause He Got His Head In Tha Sphere Decent closer Winner: Skriptz, with harder punches. Although you kinda over did it on the links. They were all there for one concept, and just one link would've sufficed. Kordozar, your personals fell short, and wouldn't made sense for shit unless you had the explanations. RTF @ a link in my sig, honest, explained votes only. :thumbup: |
Voted For: Skriptz
ok.............. skriptz-i thought you had a good verse overall..........multeis were there and in good use didnt over do it.........good rhyme scheme structer...........punches were hard hittin........and consistant kordozar- i thought your verse was all over the map with all puctuation...........................punches were ok not any killers........structer was iffy..........but ok verse overall..... v/skriptz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Uppin..............
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Voted For: Skriptz
he posts in tha why thread alot? whats wrong with that, i made that thread...lol...nah, but i wouldnt feel right votin on this battle, seeing how i made kordozar co-leader of NOK. this was a good battle. now i dont have second thoughts about him being co-leader. yall got skillz. i was guna RTF for this battle skriptz, but u guna haf'to gime another battle. if u got any battles open right now, i'll get those, otha wise i'll wait til u do....but i was feelin ur punches, and personals in this..i think kordozar came harder with tha punches part, but u got tha personals category. some of ur lines were stretched too...i dunno who won this...good battle both yall...............1............... Removed |
oops...in tha back of my mind, i kept tellin myself to post feedback, but i accidently clicked tha wrong one. i meant to click feedbac. i'll get that vote removed for yall....sry bout tha mixup....no HATE, but i cant vote on this.....
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Oops Meant Ta Press Feedback Plus He In Mih Crew!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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i PM'd strobe to have my vote taken off......111111111..................
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