Eki vs The-Marvel-Arm
 

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my first time, wish me luck

I don’t wanna diss you,
Just prove to everyone I can lyrically outlast you
Put words here, destabilize,
Make you read my shit over , hospitalize
Your brain cant cope, it aint complicated
I read your shit, your overated
why did you ring my bell,
I am mephitic, that means offensive to a sense of smell
You smell like corps, but you aint dead yet
Rise up bitch , tell me a line, that you haven’t previously set
Make something up, I am too leisurely
Comeon people vote, Give me my first win , officially

not bad man.......im checking in............................i'll spit now iight just finished with that other cat......

Im dissin this person who abreviates his name,
Cuz he's half a man no explanation for his game.
I wack emcee theres NO DOUBT about that,
so DONT SPEAK about G's cuz you aint phat.
I got nothing to go on but you aint nothing so its cool,
You talking the same OLD shit you a clown you a fool.
Juggling words just isnt your fortey,
You about to get murked as I pick at your wordplay.
Im sizzling hot but you dry with no oil,
Your a criminal mastermind and ya plans just got foiled.

Can we get some vote sin here people. My first battle i wanna know how i went!

What this 100 word stuff? just gotta type ah type type

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opener: marvel
closer: marvel
punches: marvel
structure: tie
vocab: eki
wordplay: tie
overall: marvel

marvel killed this cat, an probably officialy earned his first vitory!!!
weak battle though both y'all nedd to elevate
!!
peace


PLZ HIT THIS UP WITH AN HONEST VOTE, AS I HAVE TAKEN THE TIME TO VOTE ON YOURS
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...390#post1010390

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both verses were pretty bad, but i think marvel took it his disses were harder professed better, flow was better too. vote=marvel

peep the sig and vote.

Comeon people 1 more vote and its KO....
i really want some of my threads closed , if i have to lose let it be...
PEACE............................................. ...............................................

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Pretty mediocre for both sides.
Eki takes the witty wordplay & vocabulairy,
But..as this is a battle punches is what win it..
N Marvel had the upper hand in them..
I congratulate..Marvel with his 'first' -well earned- win.

vote:Marvel

Take the time to finish this old battle & Return the favour..

eki--
not much there, some rhymes werent perfect. i can tell its your first...not bad, but could have used some more straight punches.

marvel--
not fantastic, but there were a few good things. the forte line was good, and the " Im dissin this person who abreviates his name, Cuz he's half a man no explanation for his game." punch was pretty good.

vote -- Marvel

please, return the favor, end my battles so i can get on with it--

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101934