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The-Marvel-Arm 2 100.00%
Eki 0 0%
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Old 12-23-03, 06:47 AM   #1
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Eki vs The-Marvel-Arm

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10-20 lines
my first time, wish me luck
 
Old 12-23-03, 07:16 AM   #2
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I don’t wanna diss you,
Just prove to everyone I can lyrically outlast you
Put words here, destabilize,
Make you read my shit over , hospitalize
Your brain cant cope, it aint complicated
I read your shit, your overated
why did you ring my bell,
I am mephitic, that means offensive to a sense of smell
You smell like corps, but you aint dead yet
Rise up bitch , tell me a line, that you haven’t previously set
Make something up, I am too leisurely
Comeon people vote, Give me my first win , officially
 
Old 12-23-03, 07:20 AM   #3
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not bad man.......im checking in............................i'll spit now iight just finished with that other cat......
 
Old 12-23-03, 07:39 AM   #4
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Im dissin this person who abreviates his name,
Cuz he's half a man no explanation for his game.
I wack emcee theres NO DOUBT about that,
so DONT SPEAK about G's cuz you aint phat.
I got nothing to go on but you aint nothing so its cool,
You talking the same OLD shit you a clown you a fool.
Juggling words just isnt your fortey,
You about to get murked as I pick at your wordplay.
Im sizzling hot but you dry with no oil,
Your a criminal mastermind and ya plans just got foiled.
 
Old 12-23-03, 08:27 AM   #5
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Can we get some vote sin here people. My first battle i wanna know how i went!

What this 100 word stuff? just gotta type ah type type
 
Old 12-23-03, 09:54 AM   #6
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uppin............................................. ................................1................. .................................................. .........................1........................ .................................................. .......................1.......................... .................................................. .......................1.......................... .................................................. ...........................1
 
Old 12-23-03, 09:55 AM   #7
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opener: marvel
closer: marvel
punches: marvel
structure: tie
vocab: eki
wordplay: tie
overall: marvel

marvel killed this cat, an probably officialy earned his first vitory!!!
weak battle though both y'all nedd to elevate
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peace


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Old 12-23-03, 10:14 AM   #8
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Opener: Tie
Punches: Marvel
Complexity: Tie
Flow: Marvel
Multies: Tie (None)
Wordplay: Tie
Closer: Marvel

Both Need To Elevate

Vote: The-Marvel-Arm

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Old 12-23-03, 10:15 AM   #9
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Plz Return The Favor And Vote... In N E Of My Battles

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Old 12-23-03, 11:54 AM   #10
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Old 12-23-03, 01:41 PM   #11
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both verses were pretty bad, but i think marvel took it his disses were harder professed better, flow was better too. vote=marvel

peep the sig and vote.
 
Old 12-24-03, 04:05 AM   #12
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Comeon people 1 more vote and its KO....
i really want some of my threads closed , if i have to lose let it be...
PEACE............................................. ...............................................
 
Old 12-29-03, 10:26 AM   #13
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Old 12-29-03, 10:35 AM   #14
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Pretty mediocre for both sides.
Eki takes the witty wordplay & vocabulairy,
But..as this is a battle punches is what win it..
N Marvel had the upper hand in them..
I congratulate..Marvel with his 'first' -well earned- win.

vote:Marvel

Take the time to finish this old battle & Return the favour..
 
Old 12-29-03, 11:41 AM   #15
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eki--
not much there, some rhymes werent perfect. i can tell its your first...not bad, but could have used some more straight punches.

marvel--
not fantastic, but there were a few good things. the forte line was good, and the " Im dissin this person who abreviates his name, Cuz he's half a man no explanation for his game." punch was pretty good.

vote -- Marvel

please, return the favor, end my battles so i can get on with it--

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101934
 
 


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