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I. Mind 12-03-04 08:20 PM

Regret
 

Regret
12/3/04

I'm tired of bein afraid, tired of regrets...
Tired of makin stupid decision's I won't ever forget...
I hate my self for talking, but never did the walk...
And since I never walked,
Soon this angel to me forever will be lost...
I miss her smile, even the few word's she say's...
Why are my chance's with her keep getting less and less...
I must confess, she's my world, my princess...
Overall she's the best, n contain's all of my intrests...
She never left my mind...
I think about her all of the time...
If it's illegal to love a girl,
Then I guess I comitted a crime....
Nothing Matter's to me no more,
I just wish to know only why...
Why can't i just go tell a girl how i feel,
When I know if i don't,
I'll loose the love of my life...

True Story

BY:
Dabatos


*I just felt like writting how I felt at this very moment*

I. Mind 12-03-04 09:36 PM

Please people, give me feed back

I. Mind 12-04-04 02:53 AM

i really need feedback on this fam

Yung_Dragon 12-04-04 03:04 AM

Pretty good, pretty good, just wish I can't stop feelin that way though....

I. Mind 12-04-04 11:58 AM

than man, uppin

KiTTie 12-04-04 12:00 PM

the princess intrests line was nice........ never thought about usin that. but, ya, nice. peep Poloroid Picture 4 me papi. pz

I. Mind 12-04-04 07:50 PM

thanx uppin.........

I. Mind 12-04-04 11:34 PM

uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin

I. Mind 12-05-04 03:19 AM

please give me feed back on this, this is real emotion of how i felt and is still how i feel

La Cosa Nostra 12-05-04 04:03 AM

Very nice work. I dont really love any of my mates lol.. So I cant really relate to what your going through.. But this was definatly a good peice of writing right here.

I do on the other hand have mates that I say are like a brother to me.. But I dont think thats on the same level as what your going through.. Are you physically attracted to this girl?

Introspect. 12-05-04 04:58 AM

very nice work ma was feelin it good work.....

I. Mind 12-05-04 11:57 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Nostradamus
Very nice work. I dont really love any of my mates lol.. So I cant really relate to what your going through.. But this was definatly a good peice of writing right here.

I do on the other hand have mates that I say are like a brother to me.. But I dont think thats on the same level as what your going through.. Are you physically attracted to this girl?


yea, well wut do u mean physiscally? but i seriously am really attracted to this girl, oh and umm, just so you guys know, this is not ingenius mind the girl

I. Mind 12-06-04 07:19 PM

uppppppppppppppppppppppin

I. Mind 12-07-04 12:35 AM

uppin...................

parasite 12-17-04 07:40 PM

very good. i was really feeling it mainly cuz im going through it right now. anyway it was good.keep writing.


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