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Old 12-03-04, 08:20 PM   #1
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Regret

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Regret
12/3/04

I'm tired of bein afraid, tired of regrets...
Tired of makin stupid decision's I won't ever forget...
I hate my self for talking, but never did the walk...
And since I never walked,
Soon this angel to me forever will be lost...
I miss her smile, even the few word's she say's...
Why are my chance's with her keep getting less and less...
I must confess, she's my world, my princess...
Overall she's the best, n contain's all of my intrests...
She never left my mind...
I think about her all of the time...
If it's illegal to love a girl,
Then I guess I comitted a crime....
Nothing Matter's to me no more,
I just wish to know only why...
Why can't i just go tell a girl how i feel,
When I know if i don't,
I'll loose the love of my life...

True Story

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Dabatos


*I just felt like writting how I felt at this very moment*
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Old 12-03-04, 09:36 PM   #2
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Please people, give me feed back
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Old 12-04-04, 02:53 AM   #3
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i really need feedback on this fam
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Old 12-04-04, 03:04 AM   #4
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Pretty good, pretty good, just wish I can't stop feelin that way though....
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Old 12-04-04, 11:58 AM   #5
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than man, uppin
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Old 12-04-04, 12:00 PM   #6
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the princess intrests line was nice........ never thought about usin that. but, ya, nice. peep Poloroid Picture 4 me papi. pz
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Old 12-04-04, 07:50 PM   #7
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thanx uppin.........
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Old 12-04-04, 11:34 PM   #8
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uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin
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Old 12-05-04, 03:19 AM   #9
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please give me feed back on this, this is real emotion of how i felt and is still how i feel
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Old 12-05-04, 04:03 AM   #10
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Very nice work. I dont really love any of my mates lol.. So I cant really relate to what your going through.. But this was definatly a good peice of writing right here.

I do on the other hand have mates that I say are like a brother to me.. But I dont think thats on the same level as what your going through.. Are you physically attracted to this girl?
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Old 12-05-04, 04:58 AM   #11
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very nice work ma was feelin it good work.....
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Old 12-05-04, 11:57 AM   #12
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Very nice work. I dont really love any of my mates lol.. So I cant really relate to what your going through.. But this was definatly a good peice of writing right here.

I do on the other hand have mates that I say are like a brother to me.. But I dont think thats on the same level as what your going through.. Are you physically attracted to this girl?


yea, well wut do u mean physiscally? but i seriously am really attracted to this girl, oh and umm, just so you guys know, this is not ingenius mind the girl
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Old 12-06-04, 07:19 PM   #13
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Old 12-07-04, 12:35 AM   #14
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Old 12-17-04, 07:40 PM   #15
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very good. i was really feeling it mainly cuz im going through it right now. anyway it was good.keep writing.
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