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12-03-04, 08:20 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Regret
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Regret 12/3/04 I'm tired of bein afraid, tired of regrets... Tired of makin stupid decision's I won't ever forget... I hate my self for talking, but never did the walk... And since I never walked, Soon this angel to me forever will be lost... I miss her smile, even the few word's she say's... Why are my chance's with her keep getting less and less... I must confess, she's my world, my princess... Overall she's the best, n contain's all of my intrests... She never left my mind... I think about her all of the time... If it's illegal to love a girl, Then I guess I comitted a crime.... Nothing Matter's to me no more, I just wish to know only why... Why can't i just go tell a girl how i feel, When I know if i don't, I'll loose the love of my life... True Story BY: Dabatos *I just felt like writting how I felt at this very moment*
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12-03-04, 09:36 PM | #2 | |||||||
G.Y.T.
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IP: 4185 68F3
Please people, give me feed back
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12-04-04, 02:53 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 4185 68F3
i really need feedback on this fam
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12-04-04, 03:04 AM | #4 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: BE07 6157
Pretty good, pretty good, just wish I can't stop feelin that way though....
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12-04-04, 11:58 AM | #5 | |||||||
G.Y.T.
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IP: 4185 68F3
than man, uppin
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12-04-04, 12:00 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: A190 A400
the princess intrests line was nice........ never thought about usin that. but, ya, nice. peep Poloroid Picture 4 me papi. pz
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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12-04-04, 07:50 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: DFAE D296
thanx uppin.........
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12-04-04, 11:34 PM | #8 | |||||||
G.Y.T.
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IP: DFAE D296
uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin
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12-05-04, 03:19 AM | #9 | |||||||
G.Y.T.
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IP: DFAE D296
please give me feed back on this, this is real emotion of how i felt and is still how i feel
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12-05-04, 04:03 AM | #10 | |||||||
Bangs like bikini attol
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Very nice work. I dont really love any of my mates lol.. So I cant really relate to what your going through.. But this was definatly a good peice of writing right here.
I do on the other hand have mates that I say are like a brother to me.. But I dont think thats on the same level as what your going through.. Are you physically attracted to this girl? |
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12-05-04, 04:58 AM | #11 | ||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5510 817C
very nice work ma was feelin it good work.....
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12-05-04, 11:57 AM | #12 | ||||||||
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IP: DFAE D296
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yea, well wut do u mean physiscally? but i seriously am really attracted to this girl, oh and umm, just so you guys know, this is not ingenius mind the girl
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12-06-04, 07:19 PM | #13 | |||||||
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IP: A72F 5FD3
uppppppppppppppppppppppin
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12-07-04, 12:35 AM | #14 | |||||||
G.Y.T.
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IP: A34C 61B2
uppin...................
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12-17-04, 07:40 PM | #15 | ||||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: 1BCB 6A07
very good. i was really feeling it mainly cuz im going through it right now. anyway it was good.keep writing.
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