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Ashes To Ashes feat/Indeph.
Indeph.
Rich Pt One Ashes Where has my life gone..tragedy's been done my wife..chose my stocks..why actually enron? my life's been fun..untill I met the love of my life that's fucked up..when you go broke..from loving your wife we recently purchased a home of our own..left the nest but now all of our treasures are gone..the best is mess the call of this..god is on the phone.I expect a test I realise I didn't love her..its just her breast the kids notice..me and my wife don't speak much often we don't do much takling..our home's truly stalling my lover's sleeps in a different room..my life is different dude I use to sing Ice Cube..but now a different tune.. streetryda Poor Pt One everyday is the same trying to make a name for myself... standin on corners lookin for help, a chance at wealth... health is always unstable, people look at me and label... fables told about the man who gets food outa ladels... tables provide the shade from another house i invaded... created myself a home off the streets, life's all braided... staightened my life but there i always gona be animosity... probably doubtin my posistion that i need to rob nd leave... difference between you and i is the inference of thoughts... distrought and fought and lost blood whats the next cost... Indeph. Rich Pt Two To Ashes.. My wife just came home..I think I smell cologn you wasn't alone.."if that aint purfeum I'ma hurt you hoe bitch clean the kitchen..I'ma work you hoe.. I'm sorry I'm chirpin my tone..but baby where you been? that isn't fir on your jacket..you been with hairy men? be for real..Ima be calm still..tell me of the feelins you not feel is it me..I can pay attention to somethin and not bills" all that was said..you see I was warm headed.. I told her..one false move she was gon get it.. she had the nerve..to curse..was loose with her words nobody can pay a visit..now guess what's she missing.. it would be a nice vision..If I wasn't in a prison.. streetryda Poor Pt Two im waiting for my life to stop dangling from a piece of string... lingering sirens behind me, finally got away from stealin rings... mingle the losses costing the same brain to remain insane... trained myself and became unable to refrain my mind strains... lanes of life got to hard and i just deicded to weild this shard... hearts failing to perform, scaling the floor, bodies left to regard... the biggest shame brought me the biggest fame for my life... right from wrong, tome for songs of sorrow for i died tongiht... spliced my adam's apple sliced because the fight was too much... rushed to the emergency center but said i couldnt be touched... |
pretty good..... didnt read it all. but it semed decent. check my verse. pz.
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up up up...lets get some more feed...and read the whole thing too!!!...lol
peace~1 will return feed |
pretty good i think....i like the switching of topics you did..creative 8/10
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155449 drop some feed on ti please |
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better than my shyt
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tight shit streetryda and indeph keep it comin Katz~1~...............................
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uppin peeps lets keep the feed coming!!!!!!
peace~1 |
indepth whats wrong with u lol
get on aim mayne proverse i know its u fam get on aim~! iam gonna drop somthing quick streetrydah and indepth put an feedback on it too nice i love dis piece its good nice flow 8/`10 |
^ who are you lol
AIM=Indeph11 we gotta talk nigga.. ^_______________^ |
up up up c'mon ppl feed on this
stop sleepin peace~1 |
tight shit no hate on anythin, had the ill flow,overall it would make a great song and should be put on audio, i read all of it and i never got bored...it always hooked me in and kept me on track to read the next line
if you want check out my first topical and open mic, no hate i put a lot of work into it for my first topical, thanks peace http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=161856 |
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uppin this old shit
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