Elusiv G vs Invader_ZIM
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No dr

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-18-04 at 07:08 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 06:39 AM.

Invader_ZIM u sound like a kid
So i shud have an easy time of u getting rid
Im gonna end this as fast as a toy confiscation
Go, sit down, feel the strength of ma lyrical proglamation
Ima gonna bury you, its simple reality
U thinkin u can in, an engineered falicy
Ima real Mc spittin polysyllabic rhymes
Ur pre-school self, spittin monosyllabic lines
Ima sleeper, creep up take u surprise
U'll b shook, i'll watch u freeze n crystallise
My rhymes will kill u, with lots of possibilities
Ur verses seem to lack the "bare neccessities"
No punch, no flow, no riff......."aku-na-ma-ta-ta"
You best rest for the rest of yo dayz
Bet ur confused, dumbass, ur not in a maze
I'll give u time to catch up, batlle adjurned.............
U caught up now, now I've returned
Da ELusiv G's a lyrical mastermind
A geal eit real skills, always ontha grind

Dont even bother replying! its over! punk ass LMM & Real SKilz

Invader_ZIM has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 06:47 AM.

look kid im tired ive wooped enugh ass tonight my limits almost expired//
but ill do it just one more time giev you a lil litte to shine then 123 thats how ill swing youll hit the floor and the bell will ring //
blah blah blah pu pu pu pull the dick out ya mouth i cant //
understand u so u are gay it is true//
fuckin magget you sux at rappin real talent u lackit //
u look week im a lion and week pray is wut i seek //
us a geek huh you wann fuckin be a nun //
well you wont ever get none//
so you are on yr way grade A sertifide looser tell yr mom sed hi and no the next time i need a fuck i wont exclude her //
fuck it im done haha this rap prolly made u run......

Hey yo, dis wasn't even funny. Can u ppl vote ( in detail so not retracted). Vote for who u want..lol likee deres options. Peace and luv
ELusiv G

Yo y u ppl not voting ondis. Its a simple ass decision. When u vote, vote in detail. Thanks Peace and luv elusiv G

they not votin cuz they dont wanna hurt ya feelins cuz u SUX

please fool im more den ready to school ur ass as son as dey voted on dis i'll go again ne day! Try and read ur last 5 lines n c if they make sense.
Dyslexic ass nigga! Peace. lol punk

watup y'all vote on dis battle, its old n needs to be decide on. Good detailed votes only! Thanks. Peace.

Yo y u ppl not voting ondis. Its a simple ass decision. When u vote, vote in detail. Thanks Peace and luv elusiv G

Voted For: Elusiv G

Punches- elusiv
Flow- elusive
Wordplay- elusive
Metaphor- elusive
Structure- Tie
opener-elusive
closer-elusive
persanols- tie
man invader u need to elevate no hate dogg ur lines were stretched and they did sound lika lil kids no hate return tha favor playa http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142741

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143613

wat up, wat up, so many ppl online !!!! vote and finish dis shit so i can set up anuva battl y'all. Peace

Voted For: Elusiv G

omg. lemme do this qwik...

elusiv-punches were weak as fuck cuz u were tryin to throw too much vocab in there and it make ur punches weak as fuck. ok structure barely any wordplay. just work on doin good punches instead of focusing on making this english class...5/10

zim- weak drop on every level. nonexistant punches and structure. if u really think that was good try rappin it over a beat and watch how whack it is. work on everything or quit, for real. no hate. ....2/10

Watup y'all up n uppin to get this ko-ed so i can open a 5th battle. This needz to get wraaped up. Good detailed votes we dnt want no dq'd votes.! Peace
Check my battles:

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143324 Elusiv G vs. Invader_ZIM

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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143810 Elusiv G vs. lyrical metaphor

Peace.