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pictureperfect2 vs DustyBlunted
Battle Rules:
house rules, blind spit get yours up as soon as u can 10 -12 lines Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-04-04 at 05:13 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
DustyBlunted has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 05:13 PM.
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pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 05:14 PM.
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Look,
My dialect demands respect, when i reflect with my war like intelect.. Always remember real THUGS don't battle on the internet.. I'll push you of a building with the mic chord around your neck.. The cops know who did it like I was the "Usual Suspect"... This battle you'll regret, better come correct,No battle i'll neglect... With my ILL lyrical content,my followers build me monuments.. On the 7 continents, In every State, In every providence... So hold the derogatory comments.... I'll put this emcee in the ground next to his rotting hero(2pac) DustyBlunted record just improved to two and zero.... |
Only one battle u aint shit, beginners luck, soon to be shown a fluke
Db ya rhymes is discusting, this aint my spit he just made me puke My bitch slapped call out was “who’s dumb enough”, fo real not fake Don’t make a mistake, vote for me, carry out this fool’s fate Not only u stupid but this bitch ugly, honestly db’s not good looking Pugly wouldn’t even be considered it as the main course in home cooking I spit fire--, sirens go off, u disordily run out the battle, exits unknowing U spit--, smoke clears people leave not from fire.. cuz your annoying Trust me db u aint on my level, how many Canadian known to rap? Only time u considered above me is while checkin out a map Check his location he’s slutty, even makes the alphabet look sleazy Sandwiching AB in his location, only sick from aids u fake ass easy-E Easy- E died from aids, and I was playin off easy meaning slutty, so with the alphabet and looking sleazy and him wantin to be like him. Hope ya get it. |
Only one battle u aint shit, beginners luck, soon to be shown a fluke
Db ya rhymes is discusting, this aint my spit he just made me puke My bitch slapped call out was “who’s dumb enough”, fo real not fake Don’t make a mistake, vote for me, carry out this fool’s fate Even newbs brush off and light up dusty blunted when they’re spitting U suck and don’t belong on this site, but at least your names’s fitting I spit fire--, sirens go off, u disordily run out the battle, exits unknowing U spit--, smoke clears people leave not from fire.. cuz your annoying Trust me db u aint on my level, how many Canadian known to rap? Only time u considered above me is while checkin out a map Check his location he’s slutty, even makes the alphabet look sleazy Sandwiching AB in his location, only sick from aids u fake ass easy-E Easy- E died from aids, and I was playin off easy meaning slutty, so with the alphabet and looking sleazy and him wantin to be like him. Hope ya get it. |
uppin, lets start with at least one vote damn
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This was feedback posted for DustyBlunted
Since Im in your crew I cant vote so Ill leave you sum feedback.You had the right idea to put a bunch of multies in your verse,firt of all,it adds to your verse.But the thing is,you had too much "self ups" in youe verse,meaning you were talking about how evil and gangstaish you are.In battles,focus more on personals dissing your opponent on contents in their profiles and their names and stuff.I liked your line where you talked about real thugs not battling on the internet,that was well thought out.Your structure was pretty average,but your flow was kinda rough at parts.Just keep on battling and elevate,you'll get there.Average drop overall,focus more on the opponent.
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Voted For: DustyBlunted
Only one battle u aint shit, beginners luck, soon to be shown a fluke Db ya rhymes is discusting, this aint my spit he just made me puke 5/10 My bitch slapped call out was “who’s dumb enough”, fo real not fake Don’t make a mistake, vote for me, carry out this fool’s fate 5/10 Even newbs brush off and light up dusty blunted when they’re spitting U suck and don’t belong on this site, but at least your names’s fitting 5/10 I spit fire--, sirens go off, u disordily run out the battle, exits unknowing U spit--, smoke clears people leave not from fire.. cuz your annoying 5/10 Trust me db u aint on my level, how many Canadian known to rap? Only time u considered above me is while checkin out a map 4/10 Check his location he’s slutty, even makes the alphabet look sleazy Sandwiching AB in his location, only sick from aids u fake ass easy-E 5/10 My dialect demands respect, when i reflect with my war like intelect.. Always remember real THUGS don't battle on the internet.. 7/10 I'll push you of a building with the mic chord around your neck.. The cops know who did it like I was the "Usual Suspect"... 8/10 This battle you'll regret, better come correct,No battle i'll neglect... With my ILL lyrical content,my followers build me monuments.. 7/10 On the 7 continents, In every State, In every providence... So hold the derogatory comments.... 6/10 came down 2 better wordplay and harder punches |
Voted For: DustyBlunted
my vote goes to him cuz he had constant vocab and he was nice wit it....he has a nice flow n everything....da other guy had a nice verse too but it wasnt as good to me as this one was Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: DustyBlunted
Dusty had harder hittin punches tho' picture perfect had a good verse the punches coulda been harder. I say Dusty but it's debateable I liked this verse return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
wow, not a single punch and one personal and this cats winning, never deny the power of d/r's
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uppin
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Voted For: pictureperfect2
Flow: pictureperfect2 Punches: pictureperfect2 Structure: pictureperfect2 Personalz: DustyBlunted Metas: pictureperfect2 Creativity: DustyBlunted Enjoyment: pictureperfect2 VOTE: pictureperfect2 y'll return the fav and vgote in this battle plz http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138618 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin
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