Dear Others=Hitchcock
 

+Hitchcock+
Dear others,...i know you gon hate me
Because I'm sick, and you can't wait to waiste me
Gimme a half an hour, and i might just beat you
Silly wit the shanks, and you know what the heat do
Niggas who think im playin, well they can leak too
A couple bars and you stuffed in Jar
{beat drops}

+Hitchcock+
You got a question, but you aint really bout nothin
you really bout frontin, keep ya silly mouth buttoned
I spit stiflin heat, ya cycles defeat
I added a few pages, and made the Bible complete
I took my time, and cooked up my rhymes
This shit i stewed up, get you bruised up
The industry robbin they souls, and stealin they health
These masturbating MC's is just feelin they self
I went from photo's for promos, to polo's wit logos
Fuck coco puffs, these niggas loco for homo's :hump:
No, no, :nono: i aint on that homophobe shit
I just like a cool bitch, who can suck a full dick
Flesh is fleeting, but a legacy's forever
All about that cash, it betta be the chedda
Go in the studio, get the melodies togetha
Fuck wit me? I got more arms than a centipede remember?
Most niggas is not ballin, they salaries sparse
Its fucked up, but guess what, Reality's Harsh
Ya'll just kids' playin wit ya toys in the park
I'll sparc, pierce the dark and leave a void in ya heart
Shit aint no comedy when niggas wanna act funny
Rob they own fam, for Plat teeth and crack money
But fuck it, the plubic, they told me to shove it
So fuck yall too, i'll run yall through
Cuz my joints is way hotter than the ones yall do
You mighta came tough, but you still a lame duck
Get on a stairmaster, nicca step ya game UP
The flow sick...hmmmm bubonic in fact
The weakest mc's talk the most, how ironic is that?
Life's like a game a cards, and im likin it man
I got dealt the King of Spades wit a mic in his hand
On another note, the beef keep me movin about
The peanut butter bullets get stuck to the roof of ya mouth
Hitch spit enough heat to put you fools in a drought
And me?....the game just can't be doin with out

{Bridge}
Eh, man im tired of yall pricks disprectin me for no damn reason ya mean. So i think its time we end this right now. I got this new bitch, that suck whatever i want. So....basically yall can get off my nuts.

+Hitchcock+
Bein humble is lame, so in a couple of frames
Ima burst in this shit and straight rupture the game
You get in trouble wit me, get chastized wit slugs
Its Hitchcock, the only rapper to be Baptized in blood...dear others

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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=235252

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its ok but ya rhyme scheme is so basic.
some of ya bars dont add up to par
but apart from tha it was ok

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Not bad man, sounds more liek somin you'd do for a song, not really like a open mic type thing. the flow and multi's are cool but you lack creativty dude. I'd like to see either a more explosive story or add some metaphor's or multiples counted with syllables. The overall piece was decent, it just sounds more like a real song you know, possibly even a simple freestyle I could do off the top of my head. Anyway decent job just try to take some consideration to extending your vocabulary, creativty and imagery.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235871

good verses... keep spittin

nice due up...could put a bit more better multies together but overall nicely done!.

ight thanks for the feed, uppin this shit again.............
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