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∆ P E X X 05-29-06 05:05 PM

A• Circus!! •A
 
CHEA!! real punchey track on a heavy beat that's got that energy and knife edge you been lookin for! none of that sissy shit! Oh yeah, I almost forgot to mention that's it's a bitchslap to a dude I battled outside a club. His girl still calls me!! BBWHAHAHA

Circus - top track on my SC


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2754081
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228655

J Summers 05-29-06 05:36 PM

ad loops was a bit off... flow is battle mode... let em realize the lines....lyrics is dope...quotables like Whoa..quality seems pretty good....bumpin it real hard seeing if them vocals distort.... not bad....the rest like trail mix..i'm eatin they chex....BEAT IS GRIMEY......this is hot.......

Quote:
Originally Posted by apexx
Your girl gimme big top like a circus

Black Dragon 05-29-06 06:04 PM

this shit is hot.........quality is nice.....this shit is juss mean strate battle track rite here...the rhyme scheme wuz dope...feelin how you rode the beat too......overall dope diss track.......

pz

~1~

Dabatos 05-29-06 08:01 PM

listening.

ooh nice base on this lol. the beat is original bro, nice one. Quality nice as always, but should lower vol just alittle, lyrics are cool, but vocab is awsome lol. delivery just up alittle on this one.. feelin it though, hmm i think, since the vol is little too loud, it makes it hard for the listener to listen to the lyrics, because the vol's sorta hurt my ear on my headphones lol. but yea 7/10

Dabatos 05-29-06 08:03 PM

please rtf thank you.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...312#post2754312

∆ P E X X 05-29-06 08:38 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by J Summers
ad loops was a bit off... flow is battle mode... let em realize the lines....lyrics is dope...quotables like Whoa..quality seems pretty good....bumpin it real hard seeing if them vocals distort.... not bad....the rest like trail mix..i'm eatin they chex....BEAT IS GRIMEY......this is hot.......


Word life son, thanks. You know me man, whether it's lyrics or clarity, I don't slack on quality! punches and wordplay out the anus!! and quality?? man you can turn that shit up till your speakers bust and STILL not hear distortion hahaha

lmao, nice quote too lol, damn I couldn't pick a favorite lol

Quote:
Originally Posted by Black Dragon
this shit is hot.........quality is nice.....this shit is juss mean strate battle track rite here...the rhyme scheme wuz dope...feelin how you rode the beat too......overall dope diss track.......

pz

~1~

word thanks!

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dabatos
listening.

ooh nice base on this lol. the beat is original bro, nice one. Quality nice as always, but should lower vol just alittle, lyrics are cool, but vocab is awsome lol. delivery just up alittle on this one.. feelin it though, hmm i think, since the vol is little too loud, it makes it hard for the listener to listen to the lyrics, because the vol's sorta hurt my ear on my headphones lol. but yea 7/10


word man thanks, glad you liked the 'vocab'. but uf you thought the volume was too loud, why didn't you just........turn it down?



1

K.ontroverz.Y 05-30-06 01:42 PM

yeah....im feelin dis beat yo..hot ish

the lyrics is koo...im feelin it...the best thing i like about your music is your energy and your mic pressence. shit alwayz gets you pumped nice ish..i dont know if im the only one that notices this..but sometimes u fall off beat just a bit at times..but about the track the flow is koo falls off a bit...the lyrics is hot im feelin dat..the mic pressence is SICK...got my head bumpin...a lyrical track here. nice shit

7.3/10

Daubs 05-30-06 01:51 PM

you got a uniqe style.

And its ill, flow is on the beat through out, the beat is pretty decent.
some ill multis later on mixed with clever punches.

This was an ill track.

How do you add depth to vocals, like just on the multis?

TonyTone 05-30-06 05:55 PM

cot damn. diss trackish, obviously. everything's cool except the vocals are loud as fuck lol lyrics are fuckin crazy. flow is so damn sick, damn! the multies. delivery is nice, quality is good as alwayz. mayne this hard as shit

∆ P E X X 05-31-06 12:20 AM

CHEA!!! thanks everybody for the feed bizzle, glad you nukkas felt it!!!

lets bring this banger TO THE TIZZOP!!!

oh yeah Daubs, hit me in PM's i'll tell you the technique I used.

WUN!!

Enygma 05-31-06 01:18 PM

What's up man...

Lyrically, this song was hot. I was feeling it all the way through. The only thing I didn't like on it were the dubs. Sometimes they seemed a little loud or off or something. Flow was nice though......not the normal shit you hear everyday.

Good shit man :thumbup:

PrahJect 05-31-06 04:12 PM

Listenin...Im feelin' your energy you have that joe budden//dipset swagger, feelin your delivery alot, one of the best Ive heard...lyrics aint like amazin but they real nice.."The highway of life, this nigga a drunk driver" haa thats hot, flow is hot, This is a real hot track..source line is nice, lyrics get much better..spring break line was nice too..this is real nice..nothin wrong with this..9/10..

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...704#post2756704

can you rtf, thank you for your time

ILL GEE 05-31-06 05:16 PM

lmao... almost feel bad for da kid...lol... almost! ya delivery is always on edge when ya drop! it's like you really be angry at nukkaz when you be spitting... that drunk driver line was crazy...lol... there's a lot of quotables in there... ya quality is sick... a tad loud in some areas but for the most part ya real consistant with how ya shyt comes out... i know kats is gon be mad but you got some of the best trax on RV... real recognize real... that's all there is to it...

Apexx = a true emcee... like him or not, ya can't deny the dude's talent

good shyt man... one

Ysdat 05-31-06 08:15 PM

Damn this is direct effect spitting. Sorta shit that would make kid not want to reply.
Flow is raw and solid, kicking through it nice.
Lyrics and punches destroy the fuck out of this.

Solid track bro.

∆ P E X X 05-31-06 08:29 PM

Enyg, word thanks fam, had to drop somethin for the people man, shit's been dryin up around here lately. quick refresher in what "REAL" sounds like!!

Stackz, yeah man, 100% pure jerzey thouroughbred animal son you know how it is. haha yeah man "rip you, whne I diss you, the missiles won't miss you. I called up your doc, ock's fixin to fix you. tape up ya tissue, staple and stitch you, usin tampons to stop the bleedin like a bitch do."

ahhaha damn man, I couldn't pick just one lmao

I.G. shit man, what do I even need to say man, you already know hahahaa. you speak the truth man and never gave a fuck what anybody had to say about it. you called it man real recognize real

*daps*


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