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05-29-06, 08:02 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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And I -Dabatos
IP: 6139 23EA
yea, made this while back, jst never posted it online..
www.soundclick.com/Dabatos And I Sample is tittle Im gettin links right now. yea another song bout a girl, o well.. lol drop links http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2754309 Pm me two links with valid feedback to reopen this thread. -Don Tito Bronsky
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05-29-06, 08:43 PM
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Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP: 5375 4429
starts off with a high-pitched voice sample, wow, that's type old now man lol. the beat was nice, nice drums too.
the hook at the intro was ok a little to high in the notes with your voice, makes you sound mad young. the lyrics are cool, some stuff it seems liek you stretch one syl way out to keep the flow on liek you'd be like "yeah so I peeped you and wwwaaaasss feelin you" type like on that line bout things disapearing in the mist. vocal quality was clear. real short so hard to elaborate much more than that.
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05-29-06, 08:47 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 6139 23EA
word thanx fam.. too lazy to write another verse lol
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05-29-06, 08:56 PM
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The Alien Toung
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IP: C527 8B3F
verse sucks.....but hook is NICEEEE man....
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05-29-06, 10:34 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 6139 23EA
lol thanx.. free'd the verse sorta.. only 4 lines written lol.. apprecaite feed thanx
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05-30-06, 12:26 AM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
Playing.....
Track comes in cool... hook sounds cool, like the verse, timing sounds out in a few parts. Quality is good. hook again is cool, should get me two do a second verse on it. ok track bro. get at me. |
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05-30-06, 04:51 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 5F54 4644
thanx bro.. i'll get at u =P
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05-30-06, 05:45 PM
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Fuck Parents
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IP: FD44 D630
3rd verse me maybe?
but chea, like every1 said, that hooks nice as fuck
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05-31-06, 11:48 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: EBEC DA5C
lol thanx haha... the chorus wasnt even suppose to be liek that, the chorus was suppose to be part of the 1st verse, y u think i sed i only written 4 lines in the verse, cuz the 4 lines was suppose to be the chorus, since i used it as the chorus, i had to write 4 new lines lol.. but thanx =P
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