PheNom897 vs Infector Mindz
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 11-28-04 at 10:52 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Old / expired battle win

PheNom897 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-25-04 10:55 PM.

Infector Mindz has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-25-04 11:23 PM.

This dudes not here to affect ya mindz, he's here just to be a nusense and infect wit liez, thats why I dont even respect these guys...
battlin a pro who known fa usin nines ta slug shatties,
n literally put this nicca's Mind Above Body...*
cuz he wont shoot at me so poof daddy cuz you not wanted in rap community, especially after you battle a newbie n ask fa battle immunity...
So stick to ya day, of workin the drive thru since the rap world is somethin you can't survive dude...
cuz I can't even imagine a label willin to sign you, for spittin shit outta ya mouth,n this must lower ya self esteem by gettin kilt by a cat outta the south...
I murke niccaz like him for a Washington or Lincoln, n if you think you winnin this battle it must be them pills you poppin or you dreamin...

Explaination(I forgot it)

battlin a pro who known fa usin nines ta slug shatties,
n literally put this nicca's Mind Above Body...*

He's in the crew Mind Above Body

"Rock-This-Prick" With "Aggression" Like "Hyper-Mosh-Pits"/
Im Bright Like Fibre-Optics Fire Precise Locked-Hits Leave Yo Face Needin Mo Makeup Than "Rock-Chick"!/

weak deep "Blisterin-Blows" i couldnt felt ya "Hardest-Punchin-Hand"/
u couldnt "Punch-Sweet" when u a "FOE" swing'n with "Hawain-Punch-N-Ya-Hand"!/

flows that are 6Ft Deep.. Ma Lead-Meets Everybody He's "Dead-Peeps"
Like "Negrafhiliacs Love Rotten Pussy"..Ima "Kill-This-Cat" And "Admire-Him-Bein Dead-Meat!!"/

spits is like "Death In Ya Breath" Its Mad-Shit, "Gettin-Tragic"
Bad-Shit..u Screamin "There's Sharp Pains In Ma Neck!".."Well I Did Just Stab-It!!"/

U Comin "Sweet" When the "Text-Hit", Wit No Lyrics like Ya Neck-Slit/
It'z Over When Da Teck-Spits This Dick Iz "Cream & Clean" like A "Tube-Of-Antiseptics"/

I Stay Wit the Heat Cousin, This Ain't No Trip On Da Block But I "Roll-Wit-Da-Clip"/
You Stay Cheap On the Paper like "Smokin-A-SPLIFF"/

iiight we uppin in this bitch.....lets get at it.....0-0

i'mm lookin for some new votes.....iight lets gett um poppin in this bitch

iight we uppin for them votes...lets get um rollin its 0-0...none yet..i be votin on ya'llz battles so vote myne.

Ok i'm uppin again..damn lets get some votes..htis battles gonan be takin for ever...come on...

ok i'm upppin again.....lol this battles lasting toooo long...come on now lets get at least 1 vote

This was feedback posted for Infector Mindz
 

V/ I. M.

Tip- fix up ya structure, and don't stretch ya lines...

Phenom Tip- Fix up ya punches to make 'em hit harder, try to reword them.. or think of better concepts..

Overall- I.M. took every cata except for structure.. even tho i wasnt feelin' phenoms structure..

Stay up.

Voted For: Infector Mindz

Ol School:
decent drop from you...work on your structure tho - kinda stretchy..punches were decent, nuttin much..flow was a little off but work on that and nice vocab from you...overall nice drop just elevate a little more tho & work on that structure

897:
decent drop from you too...wasn't really feelin ur punches tho..could've been harder, the flow lacked a little..could keep up wit it...vocab was decent from yuo too..but overall work on yo punches & structure tho...

Return Tha Favor Ol School
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=168429

Voted For: Infector Mindz

Phenom:
um im not sure what you were doing but shit your stucture made my eyes bleed to death.....lol....no hate but shit work on stucture, and seriously you need to work on your flow.....also try using some witty pucnhelines and some wordplay to give it some taste lol....pz

Ol School
im not quite sure what you were pointing oit but wtf...even know im giving you this you need work on flow and stucture it seriously ran off bad....your vocab might have been great but you need work on punchlines and try using wordplay but first learn the basics lol...nah im playin your punches were good lol....wordplay was there a bit....no ahte to both pz

return the favour in the link in my sig...thanks

ok i'll vote for ya'll oh yea.....i dont have stretched lines i just add shit around it so its noticed more.....