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Goin thro the System
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Goin' thro the System
________________________________ "Listening...Beat -n- intro clean. Lyrics are clean -n- point. Stayed on topic. Style is aight. Need more emotion in this. Quality is decent. Beat overpowers your vocals a little. The second guys style was better. Feelin his verse more. Damn, that guy helped you in this rating." SCORE: 7/10 RETURN THE FAVOR: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100946 |
assumes your the second dude..
flow is real choppy.. its like blah blah blah BLAH blah blah blah BLAH// blah blah blah BLAH blah blah blah BLAH// CAPS = Snare Hit Im in a hurry so thats my lil critique for the moment, hopefully ill come back... keep doin your thing though.. pz |
yeah it does kinda sound like that..maybe i should turn down the overdubs abit and put alittle less into it on the snare lol..thx guys
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lol ya, or just dont exactly write to the snares. listen to some other emcees who dont hit every snare, just let it fllloooowwww... good luck
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emotion and mic presence is nice...flow needs work (what nick said),try to use more multis tho...quality is pretty cool...lyrics are alright...
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