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12-27-03, 08:14 PM
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Light Weight
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Goin thro the System
IP: 1B3B C284
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12-27-03, 08:17 PM
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IP: 0815 59B4
Goin' thro the System
________________________________ "Listening...Beat -n- intro clean. Lyrics are clean -n- point. Stayed on topic. Style is aight. Need more emotion in this. Quality is decent. Beat overpowers your vocals a little. The second guys style was better. Feelin his verse more. Damn, that guy helped you in this rating." SCORE: 7/10 RETURN THE FAVOR: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100946
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12-27-03, 08:21 PM
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Banned
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IP: A37E 9D4C
assumes your the second dude..
flow is real choppy.. its like blah blah blah BLAH blah blah blah BLAH// blah blah blah BLAH blah blah blah BLAH// CAPS = Snare Hit Im in a hurry so thats my lil critique for the moment, hopefully ill come back... keep doin your thing though.. pz |
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12-27-03, 08:24 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 1B3B C284
yeah it does kinda sound like that..maybe i should turn down the overdubs abit and put alittle less into it on the snare lol..thx guys
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12-27-03, 09:35 PM
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Banned
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IP: A37E 9D4C
lol ya, or just dont exactly write to the snares. listen to some other emcees who dont hit every snare, just let it fllloooowwww... good luck
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12-29-03, 02:18 AM
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IP: 117B 98C5
emotion and mic presence is nice...flow needs work (what nick said),try to use more multis tho...quality is pretty cool...lyrics are alright...
Last edited by lucid : 12-29-03 at 02:20 AM. |
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