Dank vs Slax
 

16 lines max
5 votes wins
3-0 tko
no biting,recycling
Due TONITE MIDNIGHt


Good luck

I paint his 'picture perfect' for Dank critics say 'it's hillarious'/
When they realise he's accepted my offer,look he's delerious/
I spit explicit lyrics so damaging to live's,that you have to read my words with-your-mother/
As i smother you like a 'fat man' eating a 'Super Size Meal',i wouldn't substitute this for-no-other/
Spitting with many 'Method's,'Man' your realise that i'm-'How-High'?/
But i still 'Bring Da Pain' sending homicidal lyircs to your brain,-now-cry/
Leave you in an emotional wave of 'Deep Blue See' of-smacked-words/
Your so badly disabled,that you can only-'swim-backwards'/
Rip out 'Spinal Cords' disable you from-'Backing-Up'/
Practically every area of a lyric is what your-lacking-look!/
Field them in a 'Forest' because you write lyrics with-no-'Gump'tion/
You feel you might win,But thats-your-assumption/
Throwing 'Punches' at you more powerful than 'Lennox' i'm-'rock-man'/(Hasim Rahmen)
Because you talk more 'Browner' than an american-jock's-'Tan'/
'Puff' hasn't realised 'he'll be missing'-this -'Vic-tory'/
Dank touches his anal gland as he's kissing-a-dick-story//

Wow its amazing that you wrote your verse that quick....im half way done with mine.............................................. .................................................

aiight safe.that was a pre written verse bro,jus changed a few things Peace

its cool your a newb...Heres mine

You'll Leave This Battle.. Alone~in~a~Hearse.. You're Showin~ya~Worst..
dank'll Open~ya~Skirt..
...Cause if slax Knew how ill-i-am
he Wouldn have Posted~a~Verse!!//
Keep Prayin~and~Holdin~Hope.. i'm Still Sayin~ya~Owned~at~Most..
and Next Time..
do the Game a Favor~and~Overdose!!//
Fuck Havin to Whip~out~the~Guns.. i'll Use a Verse to Rip~out~ya~Tongue..
and Have Slax Like Leprachans Eatin Corn.. Just Shit~Out~of~Luck..//
i'll Open his Chest~with~a~Knife.. Dont Believe it.. his Rep~is~Just~Hype..
and Battlin Dank'll Leave SLax Like Derek Jeter..
Number 2 for the Rest~of~his~Life!!//

not bad :wtf:

Get the vote's coming in on this shizzo then peeps while i sit and laugh at the guy's verse :laugh:

rofl@you bite and your verse was dropped in a matter of 3 minutes after i made the thread....ur whack....uppin for votes lets go people

Can we get votes.....fuckin kids do not vote.............................................. .................................................. ................................................

i bite?
dont think so son,my verse was written before the battle was started that's why i was so quick,yours was just quick because its plainly shit.

Ok homo...u used no personals nothing....Your whack face it.....Get off the net homo Uno Uppin for some votes goddamn it

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Still upping for votes on this!!
200 people online and knowone votes haha
Get the finisher in on this little girl

Quit arguing god damn it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo im not even voting on this shit cuz you guys are too busy bitching to write anything decent.