RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > The Cage > Text Battling
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Slax 0 0%
DaNkSta 0 0%
Voters: 0. You may not vote on this poll

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 12-29-03, 07:01 PM   #1
DaNkSta
Flyweight
 
DaNkSta's Avatar
 
From: NY
Dank vs Slax

IP: 6236 079F

16 lines max
5 votes wins
3-0 tko
no biting,recycling
Due TONITE MIDNIGHt


Good luck
__________________
~ The one you love to hate ~
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-29-03, 07:14 PM   #2
slaX
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP: F627 4ADE

I paint his 'picture perfect' for Dank critics say 'it's hillarious'/
When they realise he's accepted my offer,look he's delerious/
I spit explicit lyrics so damaging to live's,that you have to read my words with-your-mother/
As i smother you like a 'fat man' eating a 'Super Size Meal',i wouldn't substitute this for-no-other/
Spitting with many 'Method's,'Man' your realise that i'm-'How-High'?/
But i still 'Bring Da Pain' sending homicidal lyircs to your brain,-now-cry/
Leave you in an emotional wave of 'Deep Blue See' of-smacked-words/
Your so badly disabled,that you can only-'swim-backwards'/
Rip out 'Spinal Cords' disable you from-'Backing-Up'/
Practically every area of a lyric is what your-lacking-look!/
Field them in a 'Forest' because you write lyrics with-no-'Gump'tion/
You feel you might win,But thats-your-assumption/
Throwing 'Punches' at you more powerful than 'Lennox' i'm-'rock-man'/(Hasim Rahmen)
Because you talk more 'Browner' than an american-jock's-'Tan'/
'Puff' hasn't realised 'he'll be missing'-this -'Vic-tory'/
Dank touches his anal gland as he's kissing-a-dick-story//
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-29-03, 07:15 PM   #3
DaNkSta
Flyweight
 
DaNkSta's Avatar
 
From: NY
IP: 399E F0FD

Wow its amazing that you wrote your verse that quick....im half way done with mine.............................................. .................................................
__________________
~ The one you love to hate ~
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-29-03, 07:19 PM   #4
slaX
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP: F627 4ADE

aiight safe.that was a pre written verse bro,jus changed a few things Peace
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-29-03, 07:26 PM   #5
DaNkSta
Flyweight
 
DaNkSta's Avatar
 
From: NY
IP: 399E F0FD

its cool your a newb...Heres mine

You'll Leave This Battle.. Alone~in~a~Hearse.. You're Showin~ya~Worst..
dank'll Open~ya~Skirt..
...Cause if slax Knew how ill-i-am
he Wouldn have Posted~a~Verse!!//
Keep Prayin~and~Holdin~Hope.. i'm Still Sayin~ya~Owned~at~Most..
and Next Time..
do the Game a Favor~and~Overdose!!//
Fuck Havin to Whip~out~the~Guns.. i'll Use a Verse to Rip~out~ya~Tongue..
and Have Slax Like Leprachans Eatin Corn.. Just Shit~Out~of~Luck..//
i'll Open his Chest~with~a~Knife.. Dont Believe it.. his Rep~is~Just~Hype..
and Battlin Dank'll Leave SLax Like Derek Jeter..
Number 2 for the Rest~of~his~Life!!//
__________________
~ The one you love to hate ~
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-29-03, 07:36 PM   #6
slaX
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP: F627 4ADE

not bad

Get the vote's coming in on this shizzo then peeps while i sit and laugh at the guy's verse
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-29-03, 08:02 PM   #7
DaNkSta
Flyweight
 
DaNkSta's Avatar
 
From: NY
IP: 399E F0FD

rofl@you bite and your verse was dropped in a matter of 3 minutes after i made the thread....ur whack....uppin for votes lets go people
__________________
~ The one you love to hate ~
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-30-03, 12:36 AM   #8
DaNkSta
Flyweight
 
DaNkSta's Avatar
 
From: NY
IP: C1DA C961

Can we get votes.....fuckin kids do not vote.............................................. .................................................. ................................................
__________________
~ The one you love to hate ~
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-30-03, 07:14 AM   #9
slaX
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP: F627 4ADE

i bite?
dont think so son,my verse was written before the battle was started that's why i was so quick,yours was just quick because its plainly shit.
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-30-03, 04:10 PM   #10
DaNkSta
Flyweight
 
DaNkSta's Avatar
 
From: NY
IP: 399E F0FD

Ok homo...u used no personals nothing....Your whack face it.....Get off the net homo Uno Uppin for some votes goddamn it

dsafedshgbfgnm
__________________
~ The one you love to hate ~
  Reply With Quote
Old 01-01-04, 10:26 AM   #11
slaX
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP: F627 4ADE

Still upping for votes on this!!
200 people online and knowone votes haha
Get the finisher in on this little girl
  Reply With Quote
Old 04-08-04, 04:05 PM   #12
SINISTER
Under Oath
 
SINISTER's Avatar
 
From: For
IP: E034 DBC6

Quit arguing god damn it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
__________________
COLLABS/OPEN MIC's
The Hunted ft Paranoid
Open Battles
Vs Mystic
Send a message via AIM to SINISTER   Reply With Quote
Old 04-08-04, 05:03 PM   #13
Shadows edge
retired.
 
Shadows edge's Avatar
 
From: Urbana
IP: 75F5 BDD1

yo im not even voting on this shit cuz you guys are too busy bitching to write anything decent.
__________________
RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!
  Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 11:02 AM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.