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[pre]Thrust vs Sphere
Verses Due: Saturday, January 24th 2004
Voting Ends: Monday, January 26th 2004 Topic: Fenced In |
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g'luck...
check i'm not going to spend a lot of time on this really... since it being a pre-season type of deal... no more than 20 lines? |
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Fenced In
Enclosure to my perjure over throws the urge to escape While exposure to this space leaves my starry eyes draped Four walls overhaul gravities magnitude to my thought As pressure try’s to pull im merely schooled in this court All dimensions inflicting pressure my area grows lesser Pleasure sacrificed in this measure for worse or for better My expressions unseen…light beams pierce the darkness The compression screens my dreams of an esteemed vastness Isolation breaking....the reason….contemplating freedom But the compassion shaking my mind denies me a reason The perimeter closing my chosen path is now obstructed Left conducted by the aspersion that the guilty constructed Leaving me caged…enslaved…rage engaged just ignored And all motions displayed…….don’t penetrate the core Amounting to nothing the controllers bluffing commands Only spiritual toughness can maintain my sitting on my hands The same blood stained corners grow warmer in times Because my brain is in trauma and my eyes turning blind Oxygen lessens my lungs stress and seize contemplating Mind resting………………the fence begins replicating |
Vote.. Theo Ginn for having a verse.
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Theo Wins
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