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01-20-04, 05:14 PM | #1 | |||
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[pre]Thrust vs Sphere
IP: D637 72D3
Verses Due: Saturday, January 24th 2004
Voting Ends: Monday, January 26th 2004 Topic: Fenced In
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01-20-04, 06:21 PM | #2 | ||||||
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2nd person http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108533 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...533#post1123533 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...536#post1123536 Last edited by Theo Ginn : 01-25-04 at 06:53 AM. |
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01-22-04, 04:26 PM | #3 | ||||||
wanna play doctor????????
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g'luck...
check i'm not going to spend a lot of time on this really... since it being a pre-season type of deal... no more than 20 lines? |
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01-24-04, 12:15 PM | #4 | |||
Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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IP: 8458 EAFD
Quick Reminder: You still have to vote on 3 other battles
Edit your votes into your check in |
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01-24-04, 01:14 PM | #5 | ||||||
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Fenced In
Enclosure to my perjure over throws the urge to escape While exposure to this space leaves my starry eyes draped Four walls overhaul gravities magnitude to my thought As pressure try’s to pull im merely schooled in this court All dimensions inflicting pressure my area grows lesser Pleasure sacrificed in this measure for worse or for better My expressions unseen…light beams pierce the darkness The compression screens my dreams of an esteemed vastness Isolation breaking....the reason….contemplating freedom But the compassion shaking my mind denies me a reason The perimeter closing my chosen path is now obstructed Left conducted by the aspersion that the guilty constructed Leaving me caged…enslaved…rage engaged just ignored And all motions displayed…….don’t penetrate the core Amounting to nothing the controllers bluffing commands Only spiritual toughness can maintain my sitting on my hands The same blood stained corners grow warmer in times Because my brain is in trauma and my eyes turning blind Oxygen lessens my lungs stress and seize contemplating Mind resting………………the fence begins replicating |
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01-25-04, 11:07 AM | #6 | ||||||
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Vote.. Theo Ginn for having a verse.
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01-25-04, 01:29 PM | #7 | |||
Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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Theo Wins
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