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I'm not hurtin
I need to get some shit of my chest
Girls always gotta screw my ass up.........piss me off beyond belief Laura I thought you were different, but knowin the truth is a relief So I'm turnin over a new leaf........I dont wanna know you no more And you dont wanna know me.......So why you still around me for I'm a shut the door, I'm not gon' let you back in my life so easily Coz I never did shit and when I told you, you were'nt believin me So you beefin wid me, fight your own battles, no-one else involved Other people are in this, so from now on the friendship is disolved The world dont revolve around you, Haha your nothin, never be shit So next time you talk to me I'm gon' abuse your ass just a little bit I'm a spit on your name, fuckin bitch, I'll kick you when your down Fuck it, I'll let the whole world know, your the slut of this town Why you still around, get out my life, I dont wanna see you again Haha....your pathetic, just read this and we'll see who's hurtin then Had a row with some girl and she got other people involved so this is to her. |
you've proved your self again with this piece as a great lyrical master and a great topic spitter. this rhyme woz tighter than a virgin kid. 9 1/2 - 10. top spittin.
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thought ya really got ya feeling thru in this... very descriptive, and well worded, so it flow'd nicely.... along with a decent scheme.... not really my favourite kind of verse, personal shit, but ya executed it well.... return the favour.....
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Aiight...you could have gone deeper, but then this is the reason females can do to men what they do. Men dont think deep. Keep going.
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What up LM...... ya'll know who this is!!!!!!!
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I thought the rhyming was a bit basic. The story was ok, but a bit Emish. It was an ok drop, i guess.
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