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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
01-28-04, 08:18 AM
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Drop Of Genius
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I'm not hurtin
IP: 17AC 3451
I need to get some shit of my chest
Girls always gotta screw my ass up.........piss me off beyond belief Laura I thought you were different, but knowin the truth is a relief So I'm turnin over a new leaf........I dont wanna know you no more And you dont wanna know me.......So why you still around me for I'm a shut the door, I'm not gon' let you back in my life so easily Coz I never did shit and when I told you, you were'nt believin me So you beefin wid me, fight your own battles, no-one else involved Other people are in this, so from now on the friendship is disolved The world dont revolve around you, Haha your nothin, never be shit So next time you talk to me I'm gon' abuse your ass just a little bit I'm a spit on your name, fuckin bitch, I'll kick you when your down Fuck it, I'll let the whole world know, your the slut of this town Why you still around, get out my life, I dont wanna see you again Haha....your pathetic, just read this and we'll see who's hurtin then Had a row with some girl and she got other people involved so this is to her. |
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01-28-04, 08:23 AM
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Banned
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IP: 0C1E A020
you've proved your self again with this piece as a great lyrical master and a great topic spitter. this rhyme woz tighter than a virgin kid. 9 1/2 - 10. top spittin.
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01-28-04, 08:35 AM
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1E
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
thought ya really got ya feeling thru in this... very descriptive, and well worded, so it flow'd nicely.... along with a decent scheme.... not really my favourite kind of verse, personal shit, but ya executed it well.... return the favour.....
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01-28-04, 12:02 PM
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IP: D145 BA95
Aiight...you could have gone deeper, but then this is the reason females can do to men what they do. Men dont think deep. Keep going.
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Rev 12:11 - Use your voice...  
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02-01-04, 06:27 PM
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New to RB
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IP: 3C4D BAA2
What up LM...... ya'll know who this is!!!!!!!
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02-01-04, 07:02 PM
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IP: 3990 4060
I thought the rhyming was a bit basic. The story was ok, but a bit Emish. It was an ok drop, i guess.
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