Drunk Driver
 

Why Can't I Be Your Image Of Adolescent Perfection?
Why Can't You Fill My Soul With Neverending Protection?/
I Yearn For Attention And Maybe Just One Glance.../
To Believe In My Abilities And Maybe Earn A Second Chance/
Life To Death With Breathe To Take, Choices To Make/
Demons To Shake, Intellectual Intake, Jus To Get A Handshake
I Forsake For You To Undertake A New Revolution In Music/
Not Rap Nor Rock I Chose To Infuse It/
Used It To Rapidly Actively Bring Notions To Your Head/
Into Something You Enjoy Flowing From What You Read/
Instead You Notice Some Differently Apparent/
Invisibility The Flow Is Incoherently Transparent/
Voices Inside Perform Belligerent Bypasses/
Of Murders That Occured From Influenced Car Crashes/
The Families Lost Links That Are Searched By Authority/
A Young Girl Successful Who Joined Her College Sorrority/
Pam The Girl From Kappa Lappa Phi/
With The Reaper By Her Side She Had No Choice But To Die/
As Her Parents Arrived Looked Her In The Eyes And Prayed To God Up High/
Not Let They're Little Girl Say GoodBye
"Just Stay In Our Life Pam Please Dont Perish"/
A Drunk Driver Took The Life Of Another Soul Cherised/

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It seemed to me that you had a lot of good vocab, I liked the read, but you need to work on the structure it made it a little hard to read, and maybe not capitalizing all of the first letters. Over all it was a pretty good read. Keep at it, you seem to have to potential, now it just takes working at it to put your bar even higher.

yeah...word...good vocab...but some of the meanings to the vocab didnt match what preceded or followed what u wrote...maybe it was a vocab trip...but it was a straight drop....keep workin