Smokin Weed!.....................
 

Igrew up on Birmingham streetz,
tryin 2make up sum beatz./
ma momma thought it funni,
she atracted so many men its like a bee 2 hunni./
wen i was 15 i sold my 1st song,
jus ma look it was bout tokin ona bong,
yea u damn rite i did it all nite long./
o that blunts so scandales,
u've hit it 2 hard u cant handled it./
U suck the blunt hard wiv all u got,
u think ur high ass a kite but ur actualy not./
u no u like ma canibus,
so roll up a joint an smoke wiv us./
Ma weed aint cheap ineed more money,
bitch u got d giggles but its not funni./
ilike 2 roll a blunt ew,
and toke on a bong 2,
but best of all is the pipe,
bcus u can toke all nite!

give me feed bk people ineed the help!

cumon peeps i need the advise be as helpful as u can!

if ur jus gona h8 n not giv advise dnt say nefin!Period!

it was great exept the beggining, the rest was ill

thnx 4 dat gr8 piece of advise.i cud learn alot from dat........

Whoa...I can't believe this..this ...is...pure....shit....

Learn how to spell too.

if ur gona h8 at least give me some advise!

Stop doing text.

^ Word..

LOL....quit being meanies!!!!

you need to up a lot man. Try flowing a little better, maybe using some more advanced vocab. Lengthin your lines a little too it was short and brief and choppy and...ugh. Anyways keep uppin man, you'll get it.