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Old 02-01-04, 06:51 PM   #1
Mc Bling
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Smokin Weed!.....................

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Igrew up on Birmingham streetz,
tryin 2make up sum beatz./
ma momma thought it funni,
she atracted so many men its like a bee 2 hunni./
wen i was 15 i sold my 1st song,
jus ma look it was bout tokin ona bong,
yea u damn rite i did it all nite long./
o that blunts so scandales,
u've hit it 2 hard u cant handled it./
U suck the blunt hard wiv all u got,
u think ur high ass a kite but ur actualy not./
u no u like ma canibus,
so roll up a joint an smoke wiv us./
Ma weed aint cheap ineed more money,
bitch u got d giggles but its not funni./
ilike 2 roll a blunt ew,
and toke on a bong 2,
but best of all is the pipe,
bcus u can toke all nite!
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Old 02-01-04, 06:53 PM   #2
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give me feed bk people ineed the help!
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Old 02-01-04, 07:10 PM   #3
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cumon peeps i need the advise be as helpful as u can!
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Old 02-01-04, 07:10 PM   #4
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if ur jus gona h8 n not giv advise dnt say nefin!Period!
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Old 02-01-04, 07:53 PM   #5
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it was great exept the beggining, the rest was ill
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Old 02-02-04, 11:49 AM   #6
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thnx 4 dat gr8 piece of advise.i cud learn alot from dat........
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Old 02-02-04, 11:51 AM   #7
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Whoa...I can't believe this..this ...is...pure....shit....
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Old 02-02-04, 11:52 AM   #8
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Learn how to spell too.
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Old 02-02-04, 12:11 PM   #9
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if ur gona h8 at least give me some advise!
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Old 02-02-04, 12:13 PM   #10
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Old 02-02-04, 12:35 PM   #11
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Old 02-02-04, 12:37 PM   #12
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LOL....quit being meanies!!!!
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Old 02-02-04, 12:51 PM   #13
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you need to up a lot man. Try flowing a little better, maybe using some more advanced vocab. Lengthin your lines a little too it was short and brief and choppy and...ugh. Anyways keep uppin man, you'll get it.
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