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02-01-04, 06:51 PM | #1 | ||||
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Smokin Weed!.....................
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Igrew up on Birmingham streetz,
tryin 2make up sum beatz./ ma momma thought it funni, she atracted so many men its like a bee 2 hunni./ wen i was 15 i sold my 1st song, jus ma look it was bout tokin ona bong, yea u damn rite i did it all nite long./ o that blunts so scandales, u've hit it 2 hard u cant handled it./ U suck the blunt hard wiv all u got, u think ur high ass a kite but ur actualy not./ u no u like ma canibus, so roll up a joint an smoke wiv us./ Ma weed aint cheap ineed more money, bitch u got d giggles but its not funni./ ilike 2 roll a blunt ew, and toke on a bong 2, but best of all is the pipe, bcus u can toke all nite! |
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02-01-04, 06:53 PM | #2 | ||||
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give me feed bk people ineed the help!
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02-01-04, 07:10 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
cumon peeps i need the advise be as helpful as u can!
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02-01-04, 07:10 PM | #4 | ||||
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if ur jus gona h8 n not giv advise dnt say nefin!Period!
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02-01-04, 07:53 PM | #5 | ||||||
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it was great exept the beggining, the rest was ill
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02-02-04, 11:49 AM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
thnx 4 dat gr8 piece of advise.i cud learn alot from dat........
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02-02-04, 11:51 AM | #7 | ||||
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Whoa...I can't believe this..this ...is...pure....shit....
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02-02-04, 11:52 AM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: 7A5E D5B8
Learn how to spell too.
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02-02-04, 12:11 PM | #9 | ||||
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
if ur gona h8 at least give me some advise!
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02-02-04, 12:13 PM | #10 | |||||||
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IP: 7A5E D5B8
Stop doing text.
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02-02-04, 12:35 PM | #11 | ||||||
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^ Word..
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02-02-04, 12:37 PM | #12 | |||
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LOL....quit being meanies!!!!
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02-02-04, 12:51 PM | #13 | ||||||
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you need to up a lot man. Try flowing a little better, maybe using some more advanced vocab. Lengthin your lines a little too it was short and brief and choppy and...ugh. Anyways keep uppin man, you'll get it.
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