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dopestream
Hi, You can call me Kerr, People say i'm marvelous though,
Always saying i'm number 1...Like i haven't seen the middle finger befo' Fuck the lottery, Everything i spit down the drain is cash... That when i turn on the garbage disposal...I'm overflowed the dopest scraps I'm everywhere... from left to right And even down the middle... Waiting on your next move...to get around those wiggles Kerr is like a genious.. he's got so much rap logic.. He can make winter sound like a hot topic i'ma go strait to the nba cuz i've got soo much skill... I can brake the ankles of the fuckin tar heels I'm so well known nobody even mentions your name My fame brought me to.. Playstation video games I'm burnin' man.. ouch dude... i'm hot i'm hot! I'd still be flowin.. even if my arteries got cloged What can i say...I was gifted at a young age Consider me a prodigy...I've been rippin' it since the 1st grade My future is a bright one...So fuck colleges If u thought i couldn't make it.. U've experienced mirages I've got you hooked.. Your always running late... Listening to my shit.. And being dope yaself..You procrascinate Your brainwashed with the dopest shit around Mainsream couldn't dig up somethin betta if they were underground My flow is sound...Hearing aids vibrate the treble.. Creating bass that bump ya ears up to eye level What a good read huh? I say this 1's for the kids... Who haven't been high...But get fucked up listening to this dopeness Before i leave i figure i should give some final hellos Cuz you refuse the bounce until kerrdezzy rolls :roll: |
Your very selfabsorbed..
Passed that..nice piece i guess.. Flow was ok..and had some nice metaphors.. Though I'm still saying..wtf? |
Hmm~~This was the first piece I've read from you..and I must say impressive..you had a good wordplay and imagery going...flow seem choppy a bit..but other than that..it's a okay~~~~
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you are a strange sad individual my friend.
Deff different approach to an open mic.. not bad though umm.. yeah, not bad b. . good metas and rhyme scheme I liked it |
lol................it was aight, nothin special...........NEVER should have wasted countless seconds of my lyfe reading it, garbage, i could have writtin sumthin betta than that in my sleep.................hahah
good stuff man, nyce flow, nyce wordplay, rhyme scheme fell off at points......but a good piece, mad hilarious, stay real, peace, 1 |
nice
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some replies please
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First thing ive read from you...
It shocked me... Lol... Scared me at first... Then a warmed to it... Its very wierd just to look at... And reading it is no different... Rhyme scheme was decent enough... Flow was suprisingly good for a piece that chopped itself up so many times... This was quite good actually... Hit up the links in my sig... Thanks... Pz... |
haha no1 expects something different from the ol' sad story shit..
come on... mainstream at it's dopest lol more replies |
Please
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hmmmmmmmmmm
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hahahha...this was nice and funny and totally not
a lie...heheh nice work man |
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