Hi, You can call me Kerr, People say i'm marvelous though,
Always saying i'm number 1...Like i haven't seen the middle finger befo'
Fuck the lottery, Everything i spit down the drain is cash...
That when i turn on the garbage disposal...I'm overflowed the dopest scraps
I'm everywhere...


Waiting on your next move...to get around those wiggles
Kerr is like a genious.. he's got so much rap logic..
He can make winter sound like a hot topic
i'ma go strait to the nba cuz i've got soo much skill...
I can brake the ankles of the fuckin tar heels
I'm so well known nobody even mentions your name
My fame brought me to.. Playstation video games
I'm burnin' man.. ouch dude... i'm hot i'm hot!
I'd still be flowin.. even if my arteries got cloged
What can i say...I was gifted at a young age
Consider me a prodigy...I've been rippin' it since the 1st grade
My future is a bright one...So fuck colleges
If u thought i couldn't make it.. U've experienced mirages
I've got you hooked.. Your always running late...
Listening to my shit.. And being dope yaself..You procrascinate
Your brainwashed with the dopest shit around
Mainsream couldn't dig up somethin betta if they were underground
My flow is sound...Hearing aids vibrate the treble..
Creating bass that bump ya ears up to eye level
What a good read huh? I say this 1's for the kids...
Who haven't been high...But get fucked up listening to this dopeness
Before i leave i figure i should give some final hellos
Cuz you refuse the bounce until kerrdezzy rolls

Your very selfabsorbed..
Passed that..nice piece i guess..
Flow was ok..and had some nice metaphors..
Though I'm still saying..wtf?

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

Hmm~~This was the first piece I've read from you..and I must say impressive..you had a good wordplay and imagery going...flow seem choppy a bit..but other than that..it's a okay~~~~

you are a strange sad individual my friend.
Deff different approach to an open mic.. not bad though
umm.. yeah, not bad b. . good metas and rhyme scheme
I liked it

lol................it was aight, nothin special...........NEVER should have wasted countless seconds of my lyfe reading it, garbage, i could have writtin sumthin betta than that in my sleep.................hahah

good stuff man, nyce flow, nyce wordplay, rhyme scheme fell off at points......but a good piece, mad hilarious, stay real, peace, 1

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nice

some replies please

haha no1 expects something different from the ol' sad story shit..
come on... mainstream at it's dopest
lol more replies

Please

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