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Gunman tha Great 02-12-04 12:35 PM

I Still Love H.E.R. (commen Sense type shit)
 
ya'll remember the Common joint right? Well i listened 2 that shit 2day and decided it needed a pt.2 and who better then me? Shit aint finished yet

Her skin is torn and bruised showing signs of constant Fighting/
Teeth marks on her hands and head from random people Biting/
So innocent in the beginning heart as pure as undriven Snow/
But lately it seems she has become somewhat of a Ho/
We make love everyday and Tuesdays are our Anniversary/
Honestly though lately it seems she enjoys it Hurting Me/
Her hair is so long and beuatiful over a million daily Strokes Strong/
Her whispers can be heard from Dorms,Cell Phones,Stereos and Homes/
Cats make pornos in studios wit her, and let the streets hear her Moan/
With her 'Ready to Die' T-shirt cut right below her "Doggystyle' Tattoo/
"Illmatic' brand jeans dying her 'blueprint' spray Tennis Shoes/
Her beauty without makup with leave you Breathless/
One glimpse makes dudes act Reckless 24/7 rocking her 'Amerikka's most wanted' Necklace/
Liver is gon to shit cuz of the drinking, lungs ruined due to Smoking/
Still simply chasing her love gives something to those before were Hopeless/
The other ladies don't like her so much behind her back they call her 'bitch'/
She'll talk to anybody for a Quick Minute but getting long-term is the Trick/
She is a soldier, not scared of anybody stayed strong when under Attack/
A 'It takes a Nation' doo-rag hidden under a 'Reasonable Doubt' fitted Cap/
People argue 2 much over her it hurts her Heart it wasn't like this in the Start/
She fears being spread to thin and it maybe being ripped and torn Apart/
Her soul is Soft yet she controls every single City Block/
'All eyez on me' bracelet showing Off her 'Me against the World' engraved Watch/
After Biggie and Pac fiasco her sense of love was somewhat greatly Harmed/
Everytime she moves her hand you can head the 'life after death' written on her Forearm/
During sex she likes it Raw because she will always love being Pregnent/
She reaches orgasm everytime if the pen is stroked with love and Perfection/
Marly Marl's daughter, certified Party Starter/
Dumped "VI" a long time ago and had a remarkable breakup wit Shawn Carter/
Lately she is being 'gunned down' and gangrapped Litterally/
And has to talk and sociate to much which has Stagnated her Creativity/
But sometimes she loves it when people talk with the sense of Nostalogic/
She has 'Criminal Minded' written on a 'Stankonia' hand made Wallet/
Somewhere between '95 and now she has become addicted to Clubbing/
But all of a sudden instead of making 'love' all she is doing is Fucking/
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I still have to name some more classic and find creative and clever ways to describe 'em i'll do that and it'll be Verse 2 i guess.

Gunman tha Great 02-12-04 12:53 PM

shits already falling down stop ya sleeping my children

Gunman tha Great 02-12-04 03:33 PM

so many views so little response

Mr.Christensen 02-12-04 07:09 PM

WOW...i was in the process of writing the same thing as this

good job!

UrbanReelist 02-12-04 11:58 PM

nice shit, but it coulda been better the flow was good coulda used more vocab but other that decent post

Gunman tha Great 02-16-04 01:30 PM

upiddy up up

Penskills 02-16-04 01:37 PM

Wack! This is some wack ass shit!!!!!

Gunman tha Great 02-16-04 01:55 PM

^^^^^^^^Gab liked it^^^^^^^^^

BluMami 02-16-04 02:27 PM

wow......well it meets the requirements of story telling, "what is open mic for ?"
i like it......a pt II for that CommOn "CLASSIC" man aint no to be continued on that for real..........i like the story about a female living a strife life, and that concept was aight, other than that, it's all good keep elevating .....~GONE~

Gunman tha Great 02-17-04 03:10 PM

only reason i keep uppin this shit is i don't feel like typing my other shit


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