ya'll remember the Common joint right? Well i listened 2 that shit 2day and decided it needed a pt.2 and who better then me? Shit aint finished yet

Her skin is torn and bruised showing signs of constant Fighting/
Teeth marks on her hands and head from random people Biting/
So innocent in the beginning heart as pure as undriven Snow/
But lately it seems she has become somewhat of a Ho/
We make love everyday and Tuesdays are our Anniversary/
Honestly though lately it seems she enjoys it Hurting Me/
Her hair is so long and beuatiful over a million daily Strokes Strong/
Her whispers can be heard from Dorms,Cell Phones,Stereos and Homes/
Cats make pornos in studios wit her, and let the streets hear her Moan/
With her 'Ready to Die' T-shirt cut right below her "Doggystyle' Tattoo/
"Illmatic' brand jeans dying her 'blueprint' spray Tennis Shoes/
Her beauty without makup with leave you Breathless/
One glimpse makes dudes act Reckless 24/7 rocking her 'Amerikka's most wanted' Necklace/
Liver is gon to shit cuz of the drinking, lungs ruined due to Smoking/
Still simply chasing her love gives something to those before were Hopeless/
The other ladies don't like her so much behind her back they call her 'bitch'/
She'll talk to anybody for a Quick Minute but getting long-term is the Trick/
She is a soldier, not scared of anybody stayed strong when under Attack/
A 'It takes a Nation' doo-rag hidden under a 'Reasonable Doubt' fitted Cap/
People argue 2 much over her it hurts her Heart it wasn't like this in the Start/
She fears being spread to thin and it maybe being ripped and torn Apart/
Her soul is Soft yet she controls every single City Block/
'All eyez on me' bracelet showing Off her 'Me against the World' engraved Watch/
After Biggie and Pac fiasco her sense of love was somewhat greatly Harmed/
Everytime she moves her hand you can head the 'life after death' written on her Forearm/
During sex she likes it Raw because she will always love being Pregnent/
She reaches orgasm everytime if the pen is stroked with love and Perfection/
Marly Marl's daughter, certified Party Starter/
Dumped "VI" a long time ago and had a remarkable breakup wit Shawn Carter/
Lately she is being 'gunned down' and gangrapped Litterally/
And has to talk and sociate to much which has Stagnated her Creativity/
But sometimes she loves it when people talk with the sense of Nostalogic/
She has 'Criminal Minded' written on a 'Stankonia' hand made Wallet/
Somewhere between '95 and now she has become addicted to Clubbing/
But all of a sudden instead of making 'love' all she is doing is Fucking/
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I still have to name some more classic and find creative and clever ways to describe 'em i'll do that and it'll be Verse 2 i guess.

shits already falling down stop ya sleeping my children

so many views so little response

WOW...i was in the process of writing the same thing as this

good job!

nice shit, but it coulda been better the flow was good coulda used more vocab but other that decent post

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upiddy up up

Wack! This is some wack ass shit!!!!!

^^^^^^^^Gab liked it^^^^^^^^^

wow......well it meets the requirements of story telling, "what is open mic for ?"
i like it......a pt II for that CommOn "CLASSIC" man aint no to be continued on that for real..........i like the story about a female living a strife life, and that concept was aight, other than that, it's all good keep elevating .....~GONE~

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