good times gone i guess
The world doesnt enjoy my comapany anymore
I see them laughing these people i used to adore no more, now its menacing like the raven and the memory of elenor Friends, foes, their eyes tell the story even her eyes glazed over another chapter finished as my soul diminished Im not satisfied, thing is i believed you everytime you lied Im tired of that, my mind walks away just as she did my mind mocking me from my chamber door "Its her", I scream, "got to be her!" I beg some more lightning flashes thunder crashes and i see her soul no more So its 20 days and counting why keep track as my pains amounting Cant live like this, cant live without her Why does she still play with me Were not we, what i thought we were? Sadness, soul blinks, all matter is messed up as my heart starts to sink my history has made you think ...alone... thats just destiny talking, fate has shifted minds twisted where previously lifted her smile, granted, without saying gifted ....alone.... But that doesnt matter now this world doesnt enjoy my company anymore they hear my voice echo... but still my pains they allow |
this was kinna all over the place. like 3 poems merging into one.
& this..............."thats just destiny talking, fate has shifted minds twisted where previously lifted her smile, granted, without saying gifted" read like u were rhyming just for the sake of rhyming. im all for the self pity poems as most of mine r, but stay on track. nice effort. |
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