Tips
 

I'm 15 just started to write. N e tips?

Misguided by tyrants I live my life blinded
Reminded to spit hot never minding the climate
Depression seems viral in this spiral thats desending
fending for ourselves through drugs and money lending
Am i spending too much time fighting pressure from my peers?
Influenced by the various things i see and hear?
Will my experience pave a career in the coming years?
Or result in me self destructing and my eyes leaking tears?
My judgement remains unclear, so how can i solve these riddles
Torn between streetlife and education call me the man in the middle
These problems may seem little, but the conclusions are vital
Will i grow up to be warm and caring or rendered bitter and spiteful?
Is it rightful for me to question these defects at such an early age?
Confiding in a page to conceal my inner rage


I aint finished it yet jus smmin i typed up last night. Oh I'm from britain aswell.

yo I thought you had great multis and great vocab

yo you should post someting that uses punches

so i can see how good you are at that

but this was pretty good

one love.....

yo shit was hot good webster
and multis keep it up dude and who knowz

Safe peeps. What you mean with punches? Sorry if i seem a bit ignorant. Anyway peace.

it was a tight flo i was feelin it keep doin yo thing patner