I'm 15 just started to write. N e tips?

Misguided by tyrants I live my life blinded
Reminded to spit hot never minding the climate
Depression seems viral in this spiral thats desending
fending for ourselves through drugs and money lending
Am i spending too much time fighting pressure from my peers?
Influenced by the various things i see and hear?
Will my experience pave a career in the coming years?
Or result in me self destructing and my eyes leaking tears?
My judgement remains unclear, so how can i solve these riddles
Torn between streetlife and education call me the man in the middle
These problems may seem little, but the conclusions are vital
Will i grow up to be warm and caring or rendered bitter and spiteful?
Is it rightful for me to question these defects at such an early age?
Confiding in a page to conceal my inner rage


I aint finished it yet jus smmin i typed up last night. Oh I'm from britain aswell.

yo I thought you had great multis and great vocab

yo you should post someting that uses punches

so i can see how good you are at that

but this was pretty good

one love.....

yo shit was hot good webster
and multis keep it up dude and who knowz

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Im bad they say ooh he so evil cuz i go on blind datez with actual blindpeople.........

Safe peeps. What you mean with punches? Sorry if i seem a bit ignorant. Anyway peace.