its on
 

da rulez
i spit first
8-12 linez
u within 30 mins





here i go>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> :thefinger

bitch what kinda shit is this u post to put names in the name of the topic so people know that my name is on the battle thread dumb ass kid

my drop
 

Lemme teach ya dog,gonna chalk my first win on tha blackboard//
your styles so played, i rate it as your name...backward//
like fake gold, ya gona turn "Green" with rage//
when this newb mc,burns u off tha page//
Since you like hallucinating,huff ur own herbish aura//
i make u question yourself, more than the box of Pandora//
Like exorcism i got ya head spinnin//
have u sleepin in cushions,n i aint talkin bout bed linen//
Pop ya spinal column out, kid im poking ur rhymes//
he`s so predictable,my loses were gona be his opening lines!!//
:laugh2:

fuck off n spit!!!!
 

look
WHITE ICE vs ELOOCH NOW SPIT BITCH!!!!!!! :cussing:

suck my dick pussy that weak shit aint nothin let me show you some shit ho

want beef, i stay wit two hands on my nine like a quarter to ten/
tell the site how you said you would suck my dick if i let you win/
dont even say u hot or ill put a washrag on your forehead/
man your carrer dead this battle puttin it downhill like a bobsled/
look at ya record,let me add to it an give u a lil credit in my sig/
I'll put a hole in ya head big enough to claim it as a arceological dig/
you only started rappin cause you thought freestyle friday was tight/
write your lyrics on some "nikes" it be the only way they take "flight"/
just read an recite my verses at night before u start sleepin/
better change ya name to"collapse"kid your win beliefs got"caved in".

votez...........................................
 

:shoot: [not bad.....lets get sum votes.........UPPIN....................

E Looch took thyz with hiz metaphorez, wordplay, punches... flow... structure... an hiz aktualy made sence all the way through... unlike the otha kat, E dawg, dun eva trip bout thyz battle, sall in the bag fo u

yep elooch took this lmfao elooch ur shit was pretty sick all i had to do was look at the first punchline and i culd of telled u won........koo opener everythang stayed consistant nothin fell off and white-ce is ass cheeks lol not one nice line not even a bit lmfao

both did aight but both could of did better but cool white lines ur verse was aight but u needed to elevate u needed better punchlines,metas,wordplay flow,but your stucture was ok..elooch u did a lot better and u could understand it more ...ur punchlines,flow,multies ect. were really better than white line but hey everybody could use a little bit of inprovement even me with that said my vote goes to elooch

uppin this shit no fuckin title though take forever to close this shit

YO! I was feeling you both and white Ice I just wanna ask one thing where the hell did you get a name like that?! No but on the real YOu both had mad punches and Y'all kept it real and flowin ya know but i'm gonna go with E Looch on this one It was close but that's who i just thought was better

uppin for 1 vote

fukin haters
 

bullshit elooches shit woz wack.fukin make sense.fukin bollocks.fukin haters

Lemme teach ya dog,gonna chalk my first win on tha blackboard//
your styles so played, i rate it as your name...backward//

^Weak Punchline.... Also Weak Opener!!!!!!!!!!!!' .. 2/10

Pop ya spinal column out, kid im poking ur rhymes//
he`s so predictable,my loses were gona be his opening lines

^Alright' Punchline' Weak Closer 6/10

want beef, i stay wit two hands on my nine like a quarter to ten/
tell the site how you said you would suck my dick if i let you win/

^Alright Weak Opener!! Nice Punch 6/10

just read an recite my verses at night before u start sleepin/
better change ya name to"collapse"kid your win beliefs got"caved in".

^Alright Closer!!! Nice Punchline' ... 7/10


Vote: E Looch .. Both Verses .. Could Use Some Serious Work Though