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E Looch 5 100.00%
white-ice 0 0%
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Old 04-20-04, 09:13 AM   #1
white-ice
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From: leeds,england
its on

IP: 3354 DAC6

da rulez
i spit first
8-12 linez
u within 30 mins





here i go>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
 
Old 04-20-04, 09:14 AM   #2
E Looch
Heavy Lies The Crown
 
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bitch what kinda shit is this u post to put names in the name of the topic so people know that my name is on the battle thread dumb ass kid
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Old 04-20-04, 09:24 AM   #3
white-ice
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From: leeds,england
Talking my drop

IP: 3354 DAC6

Lemme teach ya dog,gonna chalk my first win on tha blackboard//
your styles so played, i rate it as your name...backward//
like fake gold, ya gona turn "Green" with rage//
when this newb mc,burns u off tha page//
Since you like hallucinating,huff ur own herbish aura//
i make u question yourself, more than the box of Pandora//
Like exorcism i got ya head spinnin//
have u sleepin in cushions,n i aint talkin bout bed linen//
Pop ya spinal column out, kid im poking ur rhymes//
he`s so predictable,my loses were gona be his opening lines!!//
 
Old 04-20-04, 09:26 AM   #4
white-ice
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From: leeds,england
fuck off n spit!!!!

IP: 3354 DAC6

look
WHITE ICE vs ELOOCH NOW SPIT BITCH!!!!!!!
 
Old 04-20-04, 09:28 AM   #5
E Looch
Heavy Lies The Crown
 
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suck my dick pussy that weak shit aint nothin let me show you some shit ho
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Old 04-20-04, 09:39 AM   #6
E Looch
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want beef, i stay wit two hands on my nine like a quarter to ten/
tell the site how you said you would suck my dick if i let you win/
dont even say u hot or ill put a washrag on your forehead/
man your carrer dead this battle puttin it downhill like a bobsled/
look at ya record,let me add to it an give u a lil credit in my sig/
I'll put a hole in ya head big enough to claim it as a arceological dig/
you only started rappin cause you thought freestyle friday was tight/
write your lyrics on some "nikes" it be the only way they take "flight"/
just read an recite my verses at night before u start sleepin/
better change ya name to"collapse"kid your win beliefs got"caved in".
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Old 04-20-04, 09:44 AM   #7
white-ice
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From: leeds,england
votez...........................................

IP: 3354 DAC6

[not bad.....lets get sum votes.........UPPIN....................
 
Old 04-20-04, 09:51 AM   #8
Yaz
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E Looch took thyz with hiz metaphorez, wordplay, punches... flow... structure... an hiz aktualy made sence all the way through... unlike the otha kat, E dawg, dun eva trip bout thyz battle, sall in the bag fo u
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Old 04-20-04, 09:56 AM   #9
Killah Bwoy
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yep elooch took this lmfao elooch ur shit was pretty sick all i had to do was look at the first punchline and i culd of telled u won........koo opener everythang stayed consistant nothin fell off and white-ce is ass cheeks lol not one nice line not even a bit lmfao
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Old 04-20-04, 10:02 AM   #10
iamthatdude87
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both did aight but both could of did better but cool white lines ur verse was aight but u needed to elevate u needed better punchlines,metas,wordplay flow,but your stucture was ok..elooch u did a lot better and u could understand it more ...ur punchlines,flow,multies ect. were really better than white line but hey everybody could use a little bit of inprovement even me with that said my vote goes to elooch
 
Old 04-20-04, 10:20 AM   #11
E Looch
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uppin this shit no fuckin title though take forever to close this shit
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Old 04-20-04, 10:27 AM   #12
lilkdogg1988
Light Weight
 
From: Philidelphia Pa
IP: 08B7 7EED

YO! I was feeling you both and white Ice I just wanna ask one thing where the hell did you get a name like that?! No but on the real YOu both had mad punches and Y'all kept it real and flowin ya know but i'm gonna go with E Looch on this one It was close but that's who i just thought was better
 
Old 04-20-04, 10:40 AM   #13
E Looch
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uppin for 1 vote
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Old 04-20-04, 11:10 AM   #14
white-ice
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From: leeds,england
fukin haters

IP: 3354 DAC6

bullshit elooches shit woz wack.fukin make sense.fukin bollocks.fukin haters
 
Old 04-20-04, 09:12 PM   #15
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Lemme teach ya dog,gonna chalk my first win on tha blackboard//
your styles so played, i rate it as your name...backward//

^Weak Punchline.... Also Weak Opener!!!!!!!!!!!!' .. 2/10

Pop ya spinal column out, kid im poking ur rhymes//
he`s so predictable,my loses were gona be his opening lines

^Alright' Punchline' Weak Closer 6/10

want beef, i stay wit two hands on my nine like a quarter to ten/
tell the site how you said you would suck my dick if i let you win/

^Alright Weak Opener!! Nice Punch 6/10

just read an recite my verses at night before u start sleepin/
better change ya name to"collapse"kid your win beliefs got"caved in".

^Alright Closer!!! Nice Punchline' ... 7/10


Vote: E Looch .. Both Verses .. Could Use Some Serious Work Though
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