Darrk VS someone11
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no Crew Votes No D/r Votes 3-0 Considered KO Spit it homie |
Yo, whatup? Apparantly not your level of skill
I've seen you write, and your everything but ill Beeing a long forgotten all-time loser, isn't an excuse for writing like a full-time drug abuser Your rhymes aren't worth more than a toilet roll Damnit man, you're an inspiration for birthcontrol They're like; "someone11, that win was _earned_", and you're like; "damn, another lesson _learned_" If I were you, I'd be _concerned_, 'cause your lack of skills will get you burned. Let that keyboard be alone, you've already shown How useless you are in the battle zone |
Yo Name is someone11/ I feel your Pain
Your not Worthy enough/ therefore u didnt Earn a Name Your Juss a N00b Who's Pissed/ Slipping on your Lyrics and Diss So take a Note Book,Pencil and Recorder/And take some time to Reminisce My Bad Daw/ I dont mean to DIss you But understand your Slow/ U muss have Issues By the time i'm done/ Most people will be against you I'ma be the 1st MC/ To Virtually Beat you It's ova Now/ This was alot of fun But your Virtually Dead/ And i'm Done |
Cool, let's get some votes
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Come on People.. Both Vereses were goood Let's get some VOtes..
Upppin 4 Votes |
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C'mon, we would really appreciate some votes here! |
come on People.. Uppppin 4 votes
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Darrk - Good spit man, you had some good flow.. and your punches were hitten on target.
Best Line - Yo Name is someone11/ I feel your Pain Your not Worthy enough/ therefore u didnt Earn a Name Worst Line - By the time i'm done/ Most people will be against you I'ma be the 1st MC/ To Virtually Beat you Someone11 - iight spit man, pretty simple flow.. and your punches wernt as hard as darrk's. Best Line - Yo, whatup? Apparantly not your level of skill I've seen you write, and your everything but ill Worst Line - Let that keyboard be alone, you've already shown How useless you are in the battle zone OVERALL - Close battle this one was, but I gotta go wit Darrk, his flow was better and his punches were better.. not by much.. but they were better.. Someone you need to work on your flow a bit.. and just work on your punches a little bit. VOTE - Darrk RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123227 |
upppin 4 votes.. holla i'll return da favor
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GKillaz05, thanks for the critism though /\ || || |
Someone11,
typically, the ones who pops off first is at a disadvantage, but you signed, sealed and delivered Darkk. I especially like this verse "Your rhymes aren't worth more than a toilet roll Damnit man, you're an inspiration for birthcontrol" --I like that shiz!!! Darkk, your verses were on point, but simple in comparison to Someone11. Keep in mind this is only my 2 cents, but I think you could have squashed Someone11 because although you had better flow, your punch wasn't as hard as Someone11. It is close, and I had to choose punch over flow this time...my vote goes to Someone11. |
vote/Someone11
I think he owned him with the few punches he did have like the birthcontrol it made me chuckle a lil and the opener darkk was just weak I didnt like his verse at all both was pretty even but someone11 got this http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123431 hit that up |
This battle was kinda weak in my view
Darrk you kept on usin simple rhymes in your lines shit like "My bad dawg I don't mean to diss you/ But understand your slow you must have issues" simplicity ain't good in a battle homie. 11 your shit was aight It was kinda on da simple tip too but it was a better verse than your opponents. vote=11 swing thru here and peep this joint fellaz http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...446#post1278446 |
SOMEONE11 I LIKE YOUR VERSE BETTER B/C YOU HAD NICE PUNCHES NOT IMPRESSIVE ONES BUT GOOD ENOUGH FOR A NEWBE. BOTH YO GUYS NEED TO STEP UP THOGUGH. RETURN THE FAVA:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123395
VOTE=SOMEONE11 |
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