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Spit it homie

Yo, whatup? Apparantly not your level of skill
I've seen you write, and your everything but ill

Beeing a long forgotten all-time loser,
isn't an excuse for writing like a full-time drug abuser

Your rhymes aren't worth more than a toilet roll
Damnit man, you're an inspiration for birthcontrol

They're like; "someone11, that win was _earned_", and you're like; "damn, another lesson _learned_"
If I were you, I'd be _concerned_, 'cause your lack of skills will get you burned.

Let that keyboard be alone, you've already shown
How useless you are in the battle zone

Yo Name is someone11/ I feel your Pain
Your not Worthy enough/ therefore u didnt Earn a Name

Your Juss a N00b Who's Pissed/ Slipping on your Lyrics and Diss
So take a Note Book,Pencil and Recorder/And take some time to Reminisce

My Bad Daw/ I dont mean to DIss you
But understand your Slow/ U muss have Issues

By the time i'm done/ Most people will be against you
I'ma be the 1st MC/ To Virtually Beat you

It's ova Now/ This was alot of fun
But your Virtually Dead/ And i'm Done

Cool, let's get some votes

Come on People.. Both Vereses were goood Let's get some VOtes..


Upppin 4 Votes

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C'mon, we would really appreciate some votes here!

come on People.. Uppppin 4 votes

Darrk - Good spit man, you had some good flow.. and your punches were hitten on target.

Best Line - Yo Name is someone11/ I feel your Pain
Your not Worthy enough/ therefore u didnt Earn a Name

Worst Line - By the time i'm done/ Most people will be against you
I'ma be the 1st MC/ To Virtually Beat you

Someone11 - iight spit man, pretty simple flow.. and your punches wernt as hard as darrk's.

Best Line - Yo, whatup? Apparantly not your level of skill
I've seen you write, and your everything but ill

Worst Line - Let that keyboard be alone, you've already shown
How useless you are in the battle zone

OVERALL - Close battle this one was, but I gotta go wit Darrk, his flow was better and his punches were better.. not by much.. but they were better.. Someone you need to work on your flow a bit.. and just work on your punches a little bit.

VOTE - Darrk

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123227

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upppin 4 votes.. holla i'll return da favor

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GKillaz05, thanks for the critism though
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Someone11,

typically, the ones who pops off first is at a disadvantage, but you signed, sealed and delivered Darkk. I especially like this verse "Your rhymes aren't worth more than a toilet roll
Damnit man, you're an inspiration for birthcontrol" --I like that shiz!!!

Darkk, your verses were on point, but simple in comparison to Someone11. Keep in mind this is only my 2 cents, but I think you could have squashed Someone11 because although you had better flow, your punch wasn't as hard as Someone11.

It is close, and I had to choose punch over flow this time...my vote goes to Someone11.

vote/Someone11
I think he owned him with the few punches he did have
like the birthcontrol
it made me chuckle a lil
and the opener
darkk was just weak
I didnt like his verse at all
both was pretty even
but someone11 got this
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123431
hit that up

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This battle was kinda weak in my view
Darrk you kept on usin simple rhymes in your lines shit like
"My bad dawg I don't mean to diss you/
But understand your slow you must have issues"
simplicity ain't good in a battle homie.
11 your shit was aight
It was kinda on da simple tip too but it was a better verse than your opponents.

vote=11

swing thru here and peep this joint fellaz
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...446#post1278446