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*Tay.G*SinCity* vs shifty fingers
10-15 LINES
ill drop in a bit ok |
also no crew votes(pimp rawb) lol or d/r hate votes ok thnxs
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Aiight, I'm checkkin in...........................................
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i WAGE wars with the GAGE of my gun, but ONSTAGE, i ENGAGE with a PAGE of my puns,im like a CAGED corpse but once ive begun, its like my RAGE poors from the invincable one
who knew, id destroy youre entire crew, pimps been slapped and now im coming for U/ ive already dismembered, and rendered, one of youre members, a helpless contender i hope the next one is a woman defender, cause when i bend-her, fuck her up and end-her, at least she'll be getting fucked by the opposite gender/ youre a crew of illusions, im confused with the intrusions, i defused the first and knocked this one into contusions, why you keep coming if you just keep loosin/ its like a refined lunch-time, the way you cower, and i devour youre salty-bunched-rhymes, cause on this DEVINE-HOUR, my multi's-crunch-spines unlike the COMBINED-POWER, of youre faulty-punch-lines/ you should start youre repentence,cause youre closer to death with the end of each sentence, but not to mention or add to youre tension, im like a judge and jury and youve just been sentenced/ |
hey so yeah if you wanna reply ne time normally you have a half hour but hey its all god man hit back when yah can i think i should have hit way harder then what i did like i normally do but whatever i did it real quick
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Homocide!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yo man, I told u dat I had to go to work when u made da callout and I wouldn’t be able to drop til later, so don’t be talking bout no 30 min shit. U shouldn’t have accepted da battle if u wanted me to drop widin 30 mins… Anywayz cuzz, I’m back from work now, and ready to roast yo shit….And dat’s on E’RYTHANG I LOVE dat I wrote this shit in 10 mins…
Jus lettin’ you know I’m takin this in EVERY CATEGORY… Flow/ w-p/ punches/ personals/ multis, e’rythang homie… Jus so you know Shifty… I fight durty as fuckk cuzz… This is a battle, and in a battle anythang you say and do can, and WILL, be used aginst yo ass! THINGS TO KNOW: ((jus to let u know, i hate doin explainations, but it is necessary for this battle)) *Shifty beat one of my fellow crew members… Pimp Rawb… And now he's sssooooooo proud of dat! lOl *Shifty voted against me in a battle dat I obviously won. He said my lines were stretched, but LOOK AT HIS IN HIS VERSE! Fuckkin hypocrite! Here’s da link jus for proof… http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124171 *After voting against me Shifty sent this email… Fuckk all da beginning shit, jus pay attention to da LAST reply... (in bold)... Quote: Originally Posted by *Tay.G*SinCity* Quote: Originally Posted by sHiFtY fInGeRs Quote: Originally Posted by *Tay.G*SinCity* can u put an honest vote down on this battle? http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...692#post1286692 i will return da favor wid an honest vote if u have any battles. so you re with illuminatti clan eh thats cool you with pimp rawb then...yeah we battled the votes just finished i took him 5-2 but he is real good i wanted him to join my crew lol but yeah ill vote on the battle dude aiight, thanx a lot... yeah, good shit against rawb, u took it 4 sure. not da best i seen him spit by far, but deserved da win. hey man sorry for the way my vote went it sucks it had to go down like that you would have taken it but rules are set like that for a reason sorry man i will set up our battle in a bit ok look for it __________________________________________________ ____________ *AIIGHT... LET'S GET THIS SHIT CRRRRRAAAACKKIIIIINNNN!!!* U finna get Ruptured-Wid-Depth soon as this ‘Phrase~Starts’ coz you “UNDER MA TEXT” like ma fuckkin ‘SPACE~BAR’!!// KO U aint done Nuttin-For-"CRED" so don’t try to ‘Take~"CHARGE"’, cos Shift only SERVES a “HARD PUNCH” when he works at da ‘GAY~BAR’!!// ((Hard punch= Mixed drank wid hard alcohol... C'mon, don't be so slow!!)) *Turn it up a notch!* Ya verse got more FLAT LINES than an ‘UNFOCUSED~MEDIC’, I leave recs more FUCKKED UP than this guy’s ‘VOTING~ETHICS’!!// Usin’ da Poll Un-Just then Suckkin’-Up wid a ‘Hoeish~Message’? Bitch I’ll push u DOWN A HILL wid a CONDOM ON and you still couldn’t ‘ROLL~PROTECTED’!!// ko! Brag ‘bout PIMP all you want but u aint got ‘SHIT~ON~ME’!! Ya rhyme’s jus one BIG FILLER like when ya Moms ‘SLIPS~ON~JEANS’!!//... so so tru!... Tay’s jus a Sickk-Killa dawg just ‘Get~On~Please’, Da Thought to Thrill-Us is like FANTASY SHRINKS coz he jus ‘LIVES~OFF~DREAMS’!!// *FEEL MA FLLLLLOWWWW!!!!* I ‘Teach-Fakes’ in ‘Each-State’, ‘Defeat-Tay’ is ‘He-Sane’?!? ‘Speech-Blaze’ wid ‘Each-Phrase’, ‘MCs-Baked’ in ‘Heat-Waves’!!// I ‘Feed-Rage’ at ‘Ease-Mayne’ wid ‘Teeth-Made’ to ‘Eat-Brains’ (ggrrrr), This ‘Creep-Sways’ coz ‘He’s-Drained’ like ‘Tea-Strained’ for ‘Pete’s-Sake’!!// Like FAKE HAIRED HOES THROWIN BLOWS I’m ‘HITTIN~This~“WIG”GER’, Ya “POINTS” only PENTERATE when u PROBE ya HOLE coz u really ‘SHITTY~FINGERS’!!// I’ll toss this KEYBOARD out da Window jus to leave ‘SHIFT~DISFIGURED’, & LUBRICATING my SCREEN NAME to ELOPE u still couldn’t be a “CITY”~“SLICKKER”!!// ((look at my s/n lol)) … BITCH!… |
Aiight Shifty ya had good punches and shit but Tay G. Came harder.
But Tay G. less explanation in ya freakin posts. I mean honestly dawg. Shifty-7/10 Tay G.-8/10 |
multies:Tay
Punches:tie Metahs:Tay entertaining:tay Flow:tie Structure:tie I give this to tay cuz god dammit i loved that opening line...fingers u had a lot of creativity but ur flow kinda sagged off at parts but keep it up though ...over it was a good battle (my vote goes to tay) SB |
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lOl dawg... Like I said doe mayne... I dont usually do dat shit, but I felt as if I had to this time to get my point accross. lOl and thanx for da vote anywayz. |
My Fav Verse from Shifty
its like a refined lunch-time, the way you cower, and i devour youre salty-bunched-rhymes, cause on this DEVINE-HOUR, my multi's-crunch-spines unlike the COMBINED-POWER, of youre faulty-punch-lines/ I aint got a fav verse from Tay cuz that whole verse was solid-- I don't think you needed all that explainin and shit in the verse though TAY I almost skipped it cuz I didn't think u spit yet. Ima say Shifty Fingers gets a High 5 outta 10 and Ima give Tay the 8 out of 10 in this... Tay wins. |
aww shiz almost forgot-- please return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124241 |
uhm ok now lets take a look how this really went down
ok now shifty isnt getting enough credit for this one as he should he hit hard punches encorporated multiple rhymes in every line, he hit with multi's, his structure was a bit messed but still good rythm and flow, their were alot of hidding meanings i got from shifty's rhymes, fav line-its like a refined lunch-time, the way you cower, and i devour youre salty-bunched-rhymes, cause on this DEVINE-HOUR, my multi's-crunch-spines unlike the COMBINED-POWER, of youre faulty-punch-lines/ he encorporated three dif rhyme schemes in this , reg rhymes multi's and larger multi's punches-9 structure-8 multi's-10 flow-9 total 36 ok now on the other side you also hit solid with the punches, and brought good multi's especially at the end, flow and structure both good way to much explanation i really dont like how you brought youre private messages into the explanation ...were not here to vote on what personal problems you two had so dont try to sway minds with that gay shit!!! fav line-Usin’ da Poll Un-Just then Suckkin’-Up wid a ‘Hoeish~Message’? Bitch I’ll push u DOWN A HILL wid a CONDOM ON and you still couldn’t ‘ROLL~PROTECTED’!!// punches-9 structure-8 flow-8 multi's-10 total 35 final vote shifty just by a bit Vote disqualified for Cheating. |
yo check it both of yah's killed each other with hits and personals this one was tough to judge, fuck i wanted to vote tie lol but neways lets break it down
flows- both flowed real good i liked how shifty's flowed a bit more just because he rhymed alot more in his hits, he was rhyming 3-4 words a line in most, but im not saying tay didnt multi rhyme in his verses i just think except for the end of tays that shifty did it more structure-both yo structures were their, i liked how both went pretty much the same multi's both hit with major multi's tie their to guys both had insane hard punches tay hit with better personals but shifty also hit with more creative lines so they cancel each other out and this one is stuck in a tie to .... so in the end three categories tie and shifty takes it barley with a bit of a better flow thnxs to his rhyme scheme in each of his lines |
need votes guys .....................................
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multies: i'll have to give it to shifty, and god knows i know my multis. my raps all about multis. so good job props to you shifty
Punches: they were both about equal. so tied Metas: i didn't see too many complex ones, but i'd have to give it to Shifty on the ones i saw. opening: i WAGE wars with the GAGE of my gun, but ONSTAGE, i ENGAGE with a PAGE of my puns,im like a CAGED corpse but once ive begun, its like my RAGE poors from the invincable one U finna get Ruptured-Wid-Depth soon as this ‘Phrase~Starts’ coz you “UNDER MA TEXT” like ma fuckkin ‘SPACE~BAR’!!// KO U aint done Nuttin-For-"CRED" so don’t try to ‘Take~"CHARGE"’, cos Shift only SERVES a “HARD PUNCH” when he works at da ‘GAY~BAR’!!// it would have to go to Tay. i felt it a little more. just the opening tho Flow: it was kind of hard to find tay's actual SPIT, which fucked with me, and shiftys spit was hard to grasp the flow, but when you get it it flows nicely so i'll have to give it to shifty Structure: tay g sin city it was a close battle but imma have to give it to Shifty fingers and can ya'll vote on any battles you see in the Front Lines with .\\assacre in it. i'd appreciate it 1. |
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