accomplishment vs. shadow's edge(hype match)
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.
The Object of the match:you write your verse to
hype yourself up not to make fun of your oppenent
voting must be based on how well someone hypes themselves
up

haha aight... i geuss check in

EDIT: Make this a normal battle... So i can merk this guy... Ha.. No this hype battle sounds pretty gay..

wtf... alright I guess let's just have some fun with this shit.

ayo:

I would prefer to do a regular battle.. just edit your check in if you agree so we don't clutter up the thread... we can get Dirt to change it back. If you want to do this hype shit then fine.

regular match then

This was some quick shit...

killed once so winnen again is a little defeat...
...this kids from urbana...
so i'm doin my part against the war in da middle east.../
this kid greets numbers, and shakes losses at the door...
fuck that it dosnt mean this kid has Mett - A - 4.../
tips on assault rifles leave dis kid wit hollow heads...
my verse embarrasses you and sheds some light on shadows edge.../
i'm godly, accomplishment the hip hop jesus, ack like you havent heard dis...
and finally you that towel on ya head will be put some purpose.../
claim to be squeezin life outa rappers, basically jsut so you ca cum suck...
what i'm wonderin is how ya crew is still active, once ya headphones get unplugged.../

Shit.. totally forgot this was due tonight... fuck fuck. Just got back from partying with my friends... quick shit right here, match your 10:

You – Godly? Took a style from Native… now his title too?
^ but its clear, text so ugly… even the godly dash away from you
To have a chance you gotta fix that herb structure first
Oh wait, never mind, “…/” is the best part of your verse
I hate to berate, but all this time… and that’s the best you create?
… lines so long, you must have been typing 5 days straight
It ain’t dedication that keep him writing without stop…
… just afraid of being knocked out if hit by writer’s block
This league is mostly whackness, and you ain’t in the top percent
Shoulda no showed… cuz winning this battle is just no accomplishment

Let's get some votes....

Ur verse is late Shadow.

^ it was in on thursday, so unless you vote go away.

Nah it was today "Friday"

Ok but i will vote.

Edge takes this in my eyes pretty Ez he had way better Personals and Punches.Accomp ur's was just like any average verse wasnt much Exitment.

Punches-SE
Personals-SE
Flow-SE
Overall-SE

^^my fault threads were left open so i'm letting it slide anyway here's my vote:

breakdown for accomplishment:

flow:not really working for me, like it worked on a basic level but nothing too great 5/10

volcab:good job here but you don't score as high cause it wasn't used to help your flow 6/10

punches:not too many direct hard hittin lines best,"my verse embarrasses you and sheds some light on shadows edge.../" aside from that 6/10

overall:17/30 really not liking this verse i've seen so much beter

breakdown for shadow's edge:

flow:a whole level better then accomplishment this week 7/10

volcab:nice good job here 6/10

punches:not the best i've seen from you but diffenatly better then accomplishment this week best line,"… lines so long, you must have been typing 5 days straight" pretty good 7/10

overall:20/30

vote--shadow's edge

Pretty weak battle overall

Accomplishment...weak verse man, what happened you didn't have anything in it
Flow: 6/10
Punches: 4/10
Personals: 4/10
Overall: 14/30

Shadows Edge....not your best verse, but good enough to win
Flow: 6/10
Punches: 6/10
Personals: 6/10
Overall: 18/30
Vote: Shadow

killed once so winnen again is a little defeat...
...this kids from urbana...
so i'm doin my part against the war in da middle east.../
6/10
this kid greets numbers, and shakes losses at the door...
fuck that it dosnt mean this kid has Mett - A - 4.../
6.5/10
tips on assault rifles leave dis kid wit hollow heads...
my verse embarrasses you and sheds some light on shadows edge.../
8/10 hot
i'm godly, accomplishment the hip hop jesus, ack like you havent heard dis...
and finally you that towel on ya head will be put some purpose.../
7/10
claim to be squeezin life outa rappers, basically jsut so you ca cum suck...
what i'm wonderin is how ya crew is still active, once ya headphones get unplugged.../
8/10

awsome structure like always

You – Godly? Took a style from Native… now his title too?
^ but its clear, text so ugly… even the godly dash away from you
hot 9/10
To have a chance you gotta fix that herb structure first
Oh wait, never mind, “…/” is the best part of your verse
hot shit yo 8/10
I hate to berate, but all this time… and that’s the best you create?
… lines so long, you must have been typing 5 days straight
lol pretty weak tho 6/10
It ain’t dedication that keep him writing without stop…
… just afraid of being knocked out if hit by writer’s block
7/10 nice
This league is mostly whackness, and you ain’t in the top percent
Shoulda no showed… cuz winning this battle is just no accomplishment
7/10

nice verse first couple of barz were hot

v/ shadow

4-0 shadow's edge wins