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05-16-04, 10:06 PM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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accomplishment vs. shadow's edge(hype match)
IP: 275E DC37
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max. The Object of the match:you write your verse to hype yourself up not to make fun of your oppenent voting must be based on how well someone hypes themselves up
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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05-17-04, 12:49 AM | #2 | |||||
"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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IP: 2213 AC01
haha aight... i geuss check in
EDIT: Make this a normal battle... So i can merk this guy... Ha.. No this hype battle sounds pretty gay..
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05-17-04, 08:50 PM | #3 | |||||
retired.
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IP: 919D 9DA1
wtf... alright I guess let's just have some fun with this shit.
ayo: I would prefer to do a regular battle.. just edit your check in if you agree so we don't clutter up the thread... we can get Dirt to change it back. If you want to do this hype shit then fine.
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05-20-04, 08:58 AM | #4 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
regular match then
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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05-20-04, 11:49 PM | #5 | |||||
"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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IP: 2213 AC01
This was some quick shit...
killed once so winnen again is a little defeat... ...this kids from urbana... so i'm doin my part against the war in da middle east.../ this kid greets numbers, and shakes losses at the door... fuck that it dosnt mean this kid has Mett - A - 4.../ tips on assault rifles leave dis kid wit hollow heads... my verse embarrasses you and sheds some light on shadows edge.../ i'm godly, accomplishment the hip hop jesus, ack like you havent heard dis... and finally you that towel on ya head will be put some purpose.../ claim to be squeezin life outa rappers, basically jsut so you ca cum suck... what i'm wonderin is how ya crew is still active, once ya headphones get unplugged.../
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05-21-04, 04:08 AM | #6 | |||||
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IP: 919D 9DA1
Shit.. totally forgot this was due tonight... fuck fuck. Just got back from partying with my friends... quick shit right here, match your 10:
You – Godly? Took a style from Native… now his title too? ^ but its clear, text so ugly… even the godly dash away from you To have a chance you gotta fix that herb structure first Oh wait, never mind, “…/” is the best part of your verse I hate to berate, but all this time… and that’s the best you create? … lines so long, you must have been typing 5 days straight It ain’t dedication that keep him writing without stop… … just afraid of being knocked out if hit by writer’s block This league is mostly whackness, and you ain’t in the top percent Shoulda no showed… cuz winning this battle is just no accomplishment
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05-21-04, 06:45 PM | #7 | |||||
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IP: 919D 9DA1
Let's get some votes....
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05-21-04, 09:17 PM | #8 | |||
The Truth
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IP: B682 856F
Ur verse is late Shadow.
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05-21-04, 09:20 PM | #9 | |||||
retired.
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IP: 4D92 8631
^ it was in on thursday, so unless you vote go away.
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05-21-04, 09:24 PM | #10 | |||
The Truth
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IP: B682 856F
Nah it was today "Friday"
Ok but i will vote. Edge takes this in my eyes pretty Ez he had way better Personals and Punches.Accomp ur's was just like any average verse wasnt much Exitment. Punches-SE Personals-SE Flow-SE Overall-SE
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05-21-04, 10:03 PM | #11 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
^^my fault threads were left open so i'm letting it slide anyway here's my vote:
breakdown for accomplishment: flow:not really working for me, like it worked on a basic level but nothing too great 5/10 volcab:good job here but you don't score as high cause it wasn't used to help your flow 6/10 punches:not too many direct hard hittin lines best,"my verse embarrasses you and sheds some light on shadows edge.../" aside from that 6/10 overall:17/30 really not liking this verse i've seen so much beter breakdown for shadow's edge: flow:a whole level better then accomplishment this week 7/10 volcab:nice good job here 6/10 punches:not the best i've seen from you but diffenatly better then accomplishment this week best line,"… lines so long, you must have been typing 5 days straight" pretty good 7/10 overall:20/30 vote--shadow's edge
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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05-22-04, 12:00 AM | #12 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 3240 794D
Pretty weak battle overall
Accomplishment...weak verse man, what happened you didn't have anything in it Flow: 6/10 Punches: 4/10 Personals: 4/10 Overall: 14/30 Shadows Edge....not your best verse, but good enough to win Flow: 6/10 Punches: 6/10 Personals: 6/10 Overall: 18/30 Vote: Shadow
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05-22-04, 05:39 AM | #13 | ||||||
Street Royal-T
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IP: B4F3 62B3
killed once so winnen again is a little defeat...
...this kids from urbana... so i'm doin my part against the war in da middle east.../ 6/10 this kid greets numbers, and shakes losses at the door... fuck that it dosnt mean this kid has Mett - A - 4.../ 6.5/10 tips on assault rifles leave dis kid wit hollow heads... my verse embarrasses you and sheds some light on shadows edge.../ 8/10 hot i'm godly, accomplishment the hip hop jesus, ack like you havent heard dis... and finally you that towel on ya head will be put some purpose.../ 7/10 claim to be squeezin life outa rappers, basically jsut so you ca cum suck... what i'm wonderin is how ya crew is still active, once ya headphones get unplugged.../ 8/10 awsome structure like always You – Godly? Took a style from Native… now his title too? ^ but its clear, text so ugly… even the godly dash away from you hot 9/10 To have a chance you gotta fix that herb structure first Oh wait, never mind, “…/” is the best part of your verse hot shit yo 8/10 I hate to berate, but all this time… and that’s the best you create? … lines so long, you must have been typing 5 days straight lol pretty weak tho 6/10 It ain’t dedication that keep him writing without stop… … just afraid of being knocked out if hit by writer’s block 7/10 nice This league is mostly whackness, and you ain’t in the top percent Shoulda no showed… cuz winning this battle is just no accomplishment 7/10 nice verse first couple of barz were hot v/ shadow
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05-23-04, 08:25 PM | #14 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
4-0 shadow's edge wins
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