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SpitFyre 05-19-04 04:51 PM

The Game Is Mine
 
I Am Like Gimme It All Caues The World Has Seen Enough//
I Want Rims And Trucks And A Bends That Bumbs//
Ends Add Up To Platnim A Milion Plus//
Mentions Real Enough To Tear Bulidings UP//
Luxeries And Everyone No Your Mills A Ducth//
It Feels You Up To Know That Money Fill You Touch//
So Gimme It Now Or I Am Take It Like Its Mine//
Just As Long As Its Green, Blings, Or It Shines//
Till I So Rich I Got Cats Waiten In Line//
Just To Breeth In My Presents And Gimme Daps On The Rime//
Till I Got Girls By My Side But Not To Give Me There Mind//
Just To Wear A Watch And Stand There And Give Me The Time//
Till I Am A Houes Hold Name In Every Country//
Till I Got Every Hood And Section Bumbin Me//
Till Every Single Lable Wanten Me//
And My Pocets Full A Bills Like Eletric Companys//

SpitFyre 05-19-04 04:51 PM

hye just leAVRreal feed back thx you

$ike 05-19-04 05:02 PM

didint like it do betta next time

Ez-nyce 05-20-04 03:35 PM

try again ma

snakeyes 05-21-04 02:40 PM

hey doggy dog, this was pretty good, but I had trouble trying to understand what you where meaning. Don't trip, i know you can work at it if you just connect the main idea of your drop to the vocab you are expressing. don't trip dog, i know you will get it.

pimp rawb 05-21-04 02:43 PM

Flwo Was Good But Work On ya Punches....Peace......

Soul Sickness 06-02-04 12:40 PM

it wasnt bad but it def needed some work ya kno but gl in the future iight...................................


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