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Old 05-19-04, 05:51 PM   #1
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I Am Like Gimme It All Caues The World Has Seen Enough//
I Want Rims And Trucks And A Bends That Bumbs//
Ends Add Up To Platnim A Milion Plus//
Mentions Real Enough To Tear Bulidings UP//
Luxeries And Everyone No Your Mills A Ducth//
It Feels You Up To Know That Money Fill You Touch//
So Gimme It Now Or I Am Take It Like Its Mine//
Just As Long As Its Green, Blings, Or It Shines//
Till I So Rich I Got Cats Waiten In Line//
Just To Breeth In My Presents And Gimme Daps On The Rime//
Till I Got Girls By My Side But Not To Give Me There Mind//
Just To Wear A Watch And Stand There And Give Me The Time//
Till I Am A Houes Hold Name In Every Country//
Till I Got Every Hood And Section Bumbin Me//
Till Every Single Lable Wanten Me//
And My Pocets Full A Bills Like Eletric Companys//
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Old 05-19-04, 05:51 PM   #2
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hye just leAVRreal feed back thx you
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Old 05-19-04, 06:02 PM   #3
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didint like it do betta next time
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Old 05-20-04, 04:35 PM   #4
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try again ma
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Old 05-21-04, 03:40 PM   #5
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hey doggy dog, this was pretty good, but I had trouble trying to understand what you where meaning. Don't trip, i know you can work at it if you just connect the main idea of your drop to the vocab you are expressing. don't trip dog, i know you will get it.
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Old 05-21-04, 03:43 PM   #6
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Flwo Was Good But Work On ya Punches....Peace......
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Old 06-02-04, 01:40 PM   #7
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it wasnt bad but it def needed some work ya kno but gl in the future iight...................................
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