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lil jon 06-03-04 09:05 AM

Freestlye...
 
wicky wack ur rhymes are crap,
go take a nap if u think im guna snap,
More felexable than a rubber ban,
need sum help rappin?il give u a hand,
punch u in the face coz ur a race,
case u up the back allies and kick u in da place,
im dope as fuck ur oouta luck,
ur a goose or r u a duck,
ifink ur rhymes are fuck!!
see u later allorgator..im out

Soul Sickness 06-03-04 09:21 AM

that was wack as shyt u are worse then the real lil john is at rappin.......u need to elevate all around.............

$pAwn oF $AtAn 06-04-04 04:08 PM

yo hom
I got some freestyle comin you way
I win this battle

JadedWolf 06-04-04 05:21 PM

Umm lil john just work on what you say a lil more your rhymes and what you talking about you sound like it's just wild shit everywhere. You got heat when you rap just need the words behind it kid.


:thefinger jaded

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ThaKatz 06-05-04 12:40 AM

DAMN HOMIE i thought u waz tha mand fawk happen to u...work on the line dude it dont make sense at some part like punch u in tha face cuz ur a race..could of atleast said cuz ur a disgrace..think ...man...even IM ASIAN n i said i could flow better hehehe B-OUT

swampsouljah707 06-08-04 02:16 AM

wtf
 
now what the hell was that?the damn thing dont make sense sounds like a lil kid tryin his hardest to rap lmao!!!!

-Zone Out- 06-08-04 02:55 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by insane16
that was wack as shyt u are worse then the real lil john is at rappin.......u need to elevate all around.............

lil jon dont rap
btw. this piace was wack


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