wicky wack ur rhymes are crap,
go take a nap if u think im guna snap,
More felexable than a rubber ban,
need sum help rappin?il give u a hand,
punch u in the face coz ur a race,
case u up the back allies and kick u in da place,
im dope as fuck ur oouta luck,
ur a goose or r u a duck,
ifink ur rhymes are fuck!!
see u later allorgator..im out

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"THE FRANCHISE"

that was wack as shyt u are worse then the real lil john is at rappin.......u need to elevate all around.............

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yo hom
I got some freestyle comin you way
I win this battle

Umm lil john just work on what you say a lil more your rhymes and what you talking about you sound like it's just wild shit everywhere. You got heat when you rap just need the words behind it kid.


jaded

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A Real Playa

DAMN HOMIE i thought u waz tha mand fawk happen to u...work on the line dude it dont make sense at some part like punch u in tha face cuz ur a race..could of atleast said cuz ur a disgrace..think ...man...even IM ASIAN n i said i could flow better hehehe B-OUT

now what the hell was that?the damn thing dont make sense sounds like a lil kid tryin his hardest to rap lmao!!!!