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lover boy 06-04-04 09:44 AM

killahac vs lover boy
 
10 lines................
no crew vote..............
no biteing....................

get ready!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Killah AC 06-04-04 09:48 AM

aight im in u spit first lets go !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lover boy 06-04-04 09:58 AM

I can see yo words thrugh yo mouth u ready to spit/
when u rap yo style is like die'in in my sleep I don't fell it;
to me this is a battle not a friendzy/
because yo words and punches don't torment me;
when u try to rap I put my dick in yo mouth so u can choke/
I'm not going to to stop till yo vain pop through yo throte;
with them lines u probable want get uh duel/
I can pour bleach down yr lungs and leave them brighter then they already is;
I got yo body in the ground ready to declay/
wonder'in when is the evidence gone to rot away;

I'm through...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????

kEtCh~22 06-04-04 10:06 AM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127782

dropm a vote fam & i'll hit ya battle up when he spits..thx

lover boy 06-04-04 03:25 PM

come on an vvvvvvvvvvvvvvoooooooooooootttttttttttttttttteeeee eeeeeee

lover boy 06-05-04 01:11 AM

I'm wait'in on ur post

Killah AC 06-05-04 08:10 AM

aight my bad i had 2 shoot yesterday peace !!!
ile drop now !!!

Killah AC 06-05-04 08:39 AM

listen faggot iv u eva try chokin me wid yo dick//
ile make sure your vains pop when i snap ya bones like a stick//
and iv u dont feel my style youle sure feel the crunch//
of ya brain when i eat it infront of you for lunch//
yea i wont even give you time to decay //
coz its 2 litres of petrol down your lungs you be lookin like a full ash-tray//
hey wot you say you think im not sick enough to play//
with a few matches a can o spray and the liquors on the way//
youle be left lookin flat and black like a peace o tarmac//
wich will be ok coz u already get walked over like a mat //

Killah AC 06-05-04 08:41 AM

aight im done lets get some votes on this shit peace out !!!

C-Explicit 06-05-04 08:44 AM

Aight first of all lover boy like bit eminem here... with this line...

when u rap yo style is like die'in in my sleep I don't fell it;

That was stolen already by a guy on BET vs. Whyte Out... and its by eminem....

Killah AC 06-05-04 11:12 AM

aight uppin 4 votes on this shit yea plz drop a fair vote !!!

C-Explicit 06-05-04 11:18 AM

Aight vote goes to Killah ac for the fact that LoverBoy was biting an eminem line...

Overall weak for both, but AC didnt bite so he gets the vote...

lover boy 06-05-04 11:45 AM

I did not still that line from him

.::N-Sight::. 06-05-04 11:46 AM

I can see yo words thrugh yo mouth u ready to spit/
when u rap yo style is like die'in in my sleep I don't fell it;
to me this is a battle not a friendzy/
because yo words and punches don't torment me;


^^ weak and too simple...stop using the word YO for your...NOW...lol

up complexity with metas and wordplay...not real good


listen faggot iv u eva try chokin me wid yo dick//
ile make sure your vains pop when i snap ya bones like a stick//
and iv u dont feel my style youle sure feel the crunch//
of ya brain when i eat it infront of you for lunch//
yea i wont even give you time to decay //

^^ still simple...but, this at least hits your opponent unlike his verse to you...work on complexity by being more creative with punches

Vote: Killa ac

lover boy 06-07-04 01:20 AM

vote me please


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