10 lines................
no crew vote..............
no biteing....................

get ready!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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kon vick mailbox [IMG]KON VICK

EMINEM's ^^^ Slim Shady lp

Den Den Den Den Den Den, Go go gadget dick!
Whipped that shit out, and aint no doubt about it
It hit the ground and caused an earthquake and power outage
I shouted "Now bitch, lets see who gets the best!"
Stuffed that shit in crooked and fucked that fat slut to death (Ahh!! Ahhh!)

aight im in u spit first lets go !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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"LIVING AND EXHISTING ARE TWO DIFFERANT THINGS"

I can see yo words thrugh yo mouth u ready to spit/
when u rap yo style is like die'in in my sleep I don't fell it;
to me this is a battle not a friendzy/
because yo words and punches don't torment me;
when u try to rap I put my dick in yo mouth so u can choke/
I'm not going to to stop till yo vain pop through yo throte;
with them lines u probable want get uh duel/
I can pour bleach down yr lungs and leave them brighter then they already is;
I got yo body in the ground ready to declay/
wonder'in when is the evidence gone to rot away;

I'm through...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????

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kon vick mailbox [IMG]KON VICK

EMINEM's ^^^ Slim Shady lp

Den Den Den Den Den Den, Go go gadget dick!
Whipped that shit out, and aint no doubt about it
It hit the ground and caused an earthquake and power outage
I shouted "Now bitch, lets see who gets the best!"
Stuffed that shit in crooked and fucked that fat slut to death (Ahh!! Ahhh!)

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127782

dropm a vote fam & i'll hit ya battle up when he spits..thx

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kon vick mailbox [IMG]KON VICK

EMINEM's ^^^ Slim Shady lp

Den Den Den Den Den Den, Go go gadget dick!
Whipped that shit out, and aint no doubt about it
It hit the ground and caused an earthquake and power outage
I shouted "Now bitch, lets see who gets the best!"
Stuffed that shit in crooked and fucked that fat slut to death (Ahh!! Ahhh!)

I'm wait'in on ur post

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kon vick mailbox [IMG]KON VICK

EMINEM's ^^^ Slim Shady lp

Den Den Den Den Den Den, Go go gadget dick!
Whipped that shit out, and aint no doubt about it
It hit the ground and caused an earthquake and power outage
I shouted "Now bitch, lets see who gets the best!"
Stuffed that shit in crooked and fucked that fat slut to death (Ahh!! Ahhh!)

aight my bad i had 2 shoot yesterday peace !!!
ile drop now !!!

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"LIVING AND EXHISTING ARE TWO DIFFERANT THINGS"

listen faggot iv u eva try chokin me wid yo dick//
ile make sure your vains pop when i snap ya bones like a stick//
and iv u dont feel my style youle sure feel the crunch//
of ya brain when i eat it infront of you for lunch//
yea i wont even give you time to decay //
coz its 2 litres of petrol down your lungs you be lookin like a full ash-tray//
hey wot you say you think im not sick enough to play//
with a few matches a can o spray and the liquors on the way//
youle be left lookin flat and black like a peace o tarmac//
wich will be ok coz u already get walked over like a mat //

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"LIVING AND EXHISTING ARE TWO DIFFERANT THINGS"

aight im done lets get some votes on this shit peace out !!!

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"LIVING AND EXHISTING ARE TWO DIFFERANT THINGS"

Aight first of all lover boy like bit eminem here... with this line...

when u rap yo style is like die'in in my sleep I don't fell it;

That was stolen already by a guy on BET vs. Whyte Out... and its by eminem....

aight uppin 4 votes on this shit yea plz drop a fair vote !!!

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"LIVING AND EXHISTING ARE TWO DIFFERANT THINGS"

Aight vote goes to Killah ac for the fact that LoverBoy was biting an eminem line...

Overall weak for both, but AC didnt bite so he gets the vote...

I did not still that line from him

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kon vick mailbox [IMG]KON VICK

EMINEM's ^^^ Slim Shady lp

Den Den Den Den Den Den, Go go gadget dick!
Whipped that shit out, and aint no doubt about it
It hit the ground and caused an earthquake and power outage
I shouted "Now bitch, lets see who gets the best!"
Stuffed that shit in crooked and fucked that fat slut to death (Ahh!! Ahhh!)

I can see yo words thrugh yo mouth u ready to spit/
when u rap yo style is like die'in in my sleep I don't fell it;
to me this is a battle not a friendzy/
because yo words and punches don't torment me;


^^ weak and too simple...stop using the word YO for your...NOW...lol

up complexity with metas and wordplay...not real good


listen faggot iv u eva try chokin me wid yo dick//
ile make sure your vains pop when i snap ya bones like a stick//
and iv u dont feel my style youle sure feel the crunch//
of ya brain when i eat it infront of you for lunch//
yea i wont even give you time to decay //

^^ still simple...but, this at least hits your opponent unlike his verse to you...work on complexity by being more creative with punches

Vote: Killa ac