V.i.p. Vs Outsider
 

this guy really is fuckin disgrace/
he so fat he got strech marks on his face/
your rhymes ~suck really fuckin bad/
i ~fucked your mom so legally i'm your dad/
your rhymes are wat u ~fuckin lacka/
get to~suckin how am i battlen this fudgepacka/
my rhymes will ~put u in a body bag/
on your ~foot u will be rockin a death tag/
my mouth is tha ~gun and these rhymes are ammuntion/
i aint doin this for ~fun u wanna be like me bitch stop wishin

yo, this guy's fuckin gay and his puches are out played/
your a dickhead aswell as a mutha fuckin little joke-head/
i'll sever your thoughts of mind in fucking little peices of shred/
You might aswell be a tape recorder, cuz ur just a immitator/
a backstabbin trator, wid not one mate, worse den an outsider/
like me, o! you forgot to mention my name, don't it'll make u damned/
like a curse spell makin ur testicals fall, ur brain 2 dat makes u dum-den/
i'll drown u in sorrow and won't even be sorry, n u'll need to get rum-den/
this guy couldn't win a battle, i'll give him heat failure when he startles/
reading state of da art, and makes him look like a tart wid specticals/

hahah bitch

VIP

this guy really is fuckin disgrace/
he so fat he got strech marks on his face/
Nice opener...alright punch..7/10
your rhymes ~suck really fuckin bad/
i ~fucked your mom so legally i'm your dad/
nice punch here... overall 7/10
your rhymes are wat u ~fuckin lacka/
get to~suckin how am i battlen this fudgepacka/
umm it was alright but the Lacka thingy wasnt hot 5/10
my rhymes will ~put u in a body bag/
on your ~foot u will be rockin a death tag/
not bad.. little played... 6/10
my mouth is tha ~gun and these rhymes are ammuntion/
i aint doin this for ~fun u wanna be like me bitch stop wishin
nice closer... overall 8/10

yo, this guy's fuckin gay and his puches are out played/
thats played.... and there was nothin rhymin wit it.. 3/10
your a dickhead aswell as a mutha fuckin little joke-head/
i'll sever your thoughts of mind in fucking little peices of shred/
Ummm wackness here.. need some elevation 4/10
You might aswell be a tape recorder, cuz ur just a immitator/
a backstabbin trator, wid not one mate, worse den an outsider/
Immitator and outsider dont rhyme... 3/10
like me, o! you forgot to mention my name, don't it'll make u damned/
like a curse spell makin ur testicals fall, ur brain 2 dat makes u dum-den/
i'll drown u in sorrow and won't even be sorry, n u'll need to get rum-den/
Dum-Den??? Rum-Den??? wtf WACK 3/10 for trying
this guy couldn't win a battle, i'll give him heat failure when he startles/
reading state of da art, and makes him look like a tart wid specticals/
Startles and specticals dont rhyme... kinda wack aswell 4/10

As you can see VIP took this with his better punches.. better flow..non-stretched lines....and writing in english....

Overall vote goes to VIP for not being wack lol..

Outsider elevate more man ive seen some of ure weak ass shit and i can tell your trying but u need to practice more.. try out the cyphers...

aight thankz for tha vote i apreciate it uppin for more votes

uppin for votes i'd apreciate them tha favor will be returned

cmon yall it's time to vote it would be muchly apreciated

uppin for honest votes cmon yall come vote please it would be apreciated

A'ight...hands down, this battle was not the greatest...but overall V.I.P had this shit. Not as wack as outsider...played punches, sorta uneven flow...but still better than outsiders wack ass fucking verse...no need to break it down at all.

Vote- V.I.P

Allright Outside Lacked Rhymeing and haveing a accually verse Structure punches personols every thing over all verse was like 4 or 3-10 so i think i gotta give it to

V.I.P

V/V.I.P


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aight VIP took this battle, because outsider basically is terrible...he has no rhyme scheme, and is rhyems r bad...elevate dawg for real...VIP good easy verse took this cat out thats fo sho, return da fav
v=vip

aight yall uppin for votes come on now they would be apreciated

aight yall uppin for tha last vote come on tha favor will be returned

yo V.I.P. you won this won with witty lines, nice structre, and good mettas so good job buddy
vote///V.I.P.

and hay V.I.P. if you need a crew drop a tryout in lyrical infections