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06-10-04, 04:01 PM
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V.i.p. Vs Outsider
IP: 2E43 6BFE
this guy really is fuckin disgrace/
he so fat he got strech marks on his face/ your rhymes ~suck really fuckin bad/ i ~fucked your mom so legally i'm your dad/ your rhymes are wat u ~fuckin lacka/ get to~suckin how am i battlen this fudgepacka/ my rhymes will ~put u in a body bag/ on your ~foot u will be rockin a death tag/ my mouth is tha ~gun and these rhymes are ammuntion/ i aint doin this for ~fun u wanna be like me bitch stop wishin
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06-10-04, 04:33 PM
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This is my first post!
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IP: DF7B C8F7
yo, this guy's fuckin gay and his puches are out played/
your a dickhead aswell as a mutha fuckin little joke-head/ i'll sever your thoughts of mind in fucking little peices of shred/ You might aswell be a tape recorder, cuz ur just a immitator/ a backstabbin trator, wid not one mate, worse den an outsider/ like me, o! you forgot to mention my name, don't it'll make u damned/ like a curse spell makin ur testicals fall, ur brain 2 dat makes u dum-den/ i'll drown u in sorrow and won't even be sorry, n u'll need to get rum-den/ this guy couldn't win a battle, i'll give him heat failure when he startles/ reading state of da art, and makes him look like a tart wid specticals/ hahah bitch
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06-10-04, 04:48 PM
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IP: DB49 F2F2
VIP
this guy really is fuckin disgrace/ he so fat he got strech marks on his face/ Nice opener...alright punch..7/10 your rhymes ~suck really fuckin bad/ i ~fucked your mom so legally i'm your dad/ nice punch here... overall 7/10 your rhymes are wat u ~fuckin lacka/ get to~suckin how am i battlen this fudgepacka/ umm it was alright but the Lacka thingy wasnt hot 5/10 my rhymes will ~put u in a body bag/ on your ~foot u will be rockin a death tag/ not bad.. little played... 6/10 my mouth is tha ~gun and these rhymes are ammuntion/ i aint doin this for ~fun u wanna be like me bitch stop wishin nice closer... overall 8/10 yo, this guy's fuckin gay and his puches are out played/ thats played.... and there was nothin rhymin wit it.. 3/10 your a dickhead aswell as a mutha fuckin little joke-head/ i'll sever your thoughts of mind in fucking little peices of shred/ Ummm wackness here.. need some elevation 4/10 You might aswell be a tape recorder, cuz ur just a immitator/ a backstabbin trator, wid not one mate, worse den an outsider/ Immitator and outsider dont rhyme... 3/10 like me, o! you forgot to mention my name, don't it'll make u damned/ like a curse spell makin ur testicals fall, ur brain 2 dat makes u dum-den/ i'll drown u in sorrow and won't even be sorry, n u'll need to get rum-den/ Dum-Den??? Rum-Den??? wtf WACK 3/10 for trying this guy couldn't win a battle, i'll give him heat failure when he startles/ reading state of da art, and makes him look like a tart wid specticals/ Startles and specticals dont rhyme... kinda wack aswell 4/10 As you can see VIP took this with his better punches.. better flow..non-stretched lines....and writing in english.... Overall vote goes to VIP for not being wack lol.. Outsider elevate more man ive seen some of ure weak ass shit and i can tell your trying but u need to practice more.. try out the cyphers... |
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06-10-04, 04:57 PM
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
aight thankz for tha vote i apreciate it uppin for more votes
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06-10-04, 06:25 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
uppin for votes i'd apreciate them tha favor will be returned
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06-10-04, 06:27 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
cmon yall it's time to vote it would be muchly apreciated
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06-10-04, 10:25 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
uppin for honest votes cmon yall come vote please it would be apreciated
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06-11-04, 12:06 AM
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IP: 5CC1 C246
A'ight...hands down, this battle was not the greatest...but overall V.I.P had this shit. Not as wack as outsider...played punches, sorta uneven flow...but still better than outsiders wack ass fucking verse...no need to break it down at all.
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06-11-04, 12:30 AM
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IP: F68E 299E
Allright Outside Lacked Rhymeing and haveing a accually verse Structure punches personols every thing over all verse was like 4 or 3-10 so i think i gotta give it to
V.I.P V/V.I.P ~ | * Return the Favor * | ~ http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...827#post1340827
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