Ravage vs. Nfamous
 

there is know bar or time limit, just spit .

your about to be caught up in the fire and devoured by hells beast
this ain't no battle it's a nightmare and your walkin down to elm street
your a pupil in this battleand i'm about to learn you a lesson
this is a battle to the death and the mic is my weapon
i'm like the buffy of hip-hop with all these victoms i'm slaying
your my dick, this battle's pent house and i'm about to start playin
don't bother replyin because this battles already finished
you can call me popeye and i just ate my spinish

check it
 

uppin this shit
 

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show some fuckin love
 

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nfamous won this one.......he had better punches, structure,and personalls
ravage yo flows seem moe like a short poem.....work on da punchers to cuz i wasnt feel.in themmm.............................

This battle wasnt all dat hot

Punches:Nfamous
Wordplay:None(wasnt dat illl)
Personals:None
Fav line:no one....damn dis battle was weak
Overall:Nfamous
Vote:Nfamous-Tho his wasnt fire...it was betta than Ravage's verse, so i vote for him

this wad not to good of a battle my voet dont count but i think that Nfamous won

-Nfamous.
your about to be caught up in the fire and devoured by hells beast
this ain't no battle it's a nightmare and your walkin down to elm street
coo flow, liked the multi, aight wordplay, aight punch
your a pupil in this battleand i'm about to learn you a lesson
this is a battle to the death and the mic is my weapon
average flow, weak wordplay, weak punch
i'm like the buffy of hip-hop with all these victoms i'm slaying
your my dick, this battle's pent house and i'm about to start playin
average flow, coo wordplay, weak punch
don't bother replyin because this battles already finished
you can call me popeye and i just ate my spinish
average flow, aight wordplay, weak punch


-Ravage.
~~notfamous apointed my ravage whore~~
~~beatin that ass hard till he wanted more~~
average flow, weak wordplay, no punch
~~not my fault you always fallin short~~
~~like a midget on a ballin court~~
coo flow, liked the multi, aight wordplay, aight punch
~~or the fat kid that gets picked last~~
~~just useless except for a few laughs~~
weak flow, weak wordplay, no punch
~~sorry didnt intend 4 ya ta shed tears~~
~~but somehow gotta conquer all fears~~
average flow, no wordplay, no punch
~~letten shit outa the closet mist~~
~uncovered NFamous fuckin that larana bobet bitch~
~sameless cuz she likes him cocklesss and fameless~
coo flow, weak wordplay, no punch


Overall N got this. He attempted punchlines, while Rav didn't. Both had flow here and there. N also had the better wordplay. Rav, work on being more consistent with your multis, forming punchlines, and creativity. N, work on your wording, creativity, and consistency with multis.


Vote - Nfamous.

uppin for more votes so i can close this battle and move on to more

Aight Ravage Had Weak Punches And Wordplays Were Weak//

N-famous Had Weak Punches Also But It Edge It To Beat Ravage Verse//

Dis Was And Weak Battle Though

Yo Return An Fav Its In Da Sig Mayne

come on more votes i want this thread closed

I guess Nfamous won, although this wasn't that good of a battle. He just came with harder punches, though both of you need to work on your structure...
Vote - Nfamous

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