Street Legend .:vs:. C.M.F.S
 

yo lets do this yo

yo BITCH!

C.M.F.S, Coward Missin Formal Structure//
scorned u suckas, i run u ova like stormin truckas//
ya text record will always remain negative//
u remain hesitant when i aim at ya brain pressurin//
i leave ya brains open so i can expand ya knowledge//
i demand ya power, im God man i handle prophets//
Im street legend, reap fellas, to a certain extent//
u a pussy birthin the kids, i gotta urge to hearse ya men//
i been through insane battles, u scarred for life like stained statues//
fuck ya feet i give u brain shackles, this battle is just a main tackle//

to u C.M.F.S
Coward Missin Formal Structure

i'm sick of this mutha fuckin fake MC
you there who continious to post against me
tryin to bust rhymes from the top you should stop
coz you the punk ass who gonna get dropped
see i was born into the game of hip hop
and the rest of you are just lame smokin pot
so this is what i got and i know can not
rise like me you'll go to hell and rot
specially you foolz preachin the good lord n shit
man i wish i could reach you with a stick
i'd hit you so hard you'll drop to the ground
mutha fucker you lucky you not from my town
ok i'll wrap this shit up at 14 lines
any ya'll gonna give me the time...

yo lets get some votes man............................

uppin..........

break down

punches:SL
flow:both
structure:SL
worplay:SL(but not that much)
personals:both
overall:street

The Break Down

punches:Street definatly had more creativity and hit harder
flow:both of ya'll was pretty good, but i still thought Street came out on top
structure:about the same
personals:street took this with his opening line
overall:street
vote on my shit please
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129135

C.M.F.S =stand for comon man fucking simple you need to upgrade you had an okay flow but that it no punches or personal that y street legend won

thanx at least ya'll think my shit was half decent
maybe i do have a chance at this battlin thing
and ya'll know i'm new and i just got started
but for now peace and uh.. fuck the retarted(lyrically incapable)

uppin.......................

Both came pretty weak but SL took this...He had most of the hard punches
CMFS your lines was too stretched and plus you punches came weaker..
you didnt have similies or metaphore and Sl had a little but but both came kindof weak..Both elevate..

v/SL for atleast having harder punches

Street-



A so so opening



Kinda a weak ending to a so so verse.

Overall you had nice stucture and flow but the punches wernt that solid and creative.

CMFS-



^^^ ur verse consisted mostly of lines like this so im not gunna waste my time and write them out. You just need to keep practicin and tryin to make up hard punches to throw at ur opponents. On a lighter not i do see potential and overall u kept a decent flow and simple structure. In the end tho my vote goes to street for harder punches.

vote= street