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06-11-04, 07:24 PM
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Street Legend .:vs:. C.M.F.S
IP: C1DA C961
yo lets do this yo
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06-11-04, 07:43 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
yo BITCH!
C.M.F.S, Coward Missin Formal Structure// scorned u suckas, i run u ova like stormin truckas// ya text record will always remain negative// u remain hesitant when i aim at ya brain pressurin// i leave ya brains open so i can expand ya knowledge// i demand ya power, im God man i handle prophets// Im street legend, reap fellas, to a certain extent// u a pussy birthin the kids, i gotta urge to hearse ya men// i been through insane battles, u scarred for life like stained statues// fuck ya feet i give u brain shackles, this battle is just a main tackle// to u C.M.F.S Coward Missin Formal Structure
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06-11-04, 07:58 PM
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IP: A88B F94E
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i'm sick of this mutha fuckin fake MC you there who continious to post against me tryin to bust rhymes from the top you should stop coz you the punk ass who gonna get dropped see i was born into the game of hip hop and the rest of you are just lame smokin pot so this is what i got and i know can not rise like me you'll go to hell and rot specially you foolz preachin the good lord n shit man i wish i could reach you with a stick i'd hit you so hard you'll drop to the ground mutha fucker you lucky you not from my town ok i'll wrap this shit up at 14 lines any ya'll gonna give me the time...
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06-11-04, 08:05 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
yo lets get some votes man............................
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06-11-04, 08:46 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
uppin..........
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06-11-04, 08:56 PM
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Just Another DipSet
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IP: C1DA C961
break down
punches:SL flow:both structure:SL worplay:SL(but not that much) personals:both overall:street
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06-11-04, 09:04 PM
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IP: 3037 EC2C
The Break Down
punches:Street definatly had more creativity and hit harder flow:both of ya'll was pretty good, but i still thought Street came out on top structure:about the same personals:street took this with his opening line overall:street vote on my shit please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129135 |
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06-11-04, 11:07 PM
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you gotta hear me again
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IP: B220 97E7
C.M.F.S =stand for comon man fucking simple you need to upgrade you had an okay flow but that it no punches or personal that y street legend won
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06-12-04, 02:55 AM
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IP: A88B F94E
thanx at least ya'll think my shit was half decent
maybe i do have a chance at this battlin thing and ya'll know i'm new and i just got started but for now peace and uh.. fuck the retarted(lyrically incapable)
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06-12-04, 02:31 PM
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IP: 4289 77F4
uppin.......................
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06-12-04, 03:08 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Both came pretty weak but SL took this...He had most of the hard punches
CMFS your lines was too stretched and plus you punches came weaker.. you didnt have similies or metaphore and Sl had a little but but both came kindof weak..Both elevate.. v/SL for atleast having harder punches
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06-12-04, 04:01 PM
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IP: BD03 F839
Street-
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A so so opening Quote:
Kinda a weak ending to a so so verse. Overall you had nice stucture and flow but the punches wernt that solid and creative. CMFS- Quote:
^^^ ur verse consisted mostly of lines like this so im not gunna waste my time and write them out. You just need to keep practicin and tryin to make up hard punches to throw at ur opponents. On a lighter not i do see potential and overall u kept a decent flow and simple structure. In the end tho my vote goes to street for harder punches. vote= street
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